I absolutely love this story can't wait to see I'f it gets an update! I just need to know what happens! Love love xxx when you realise you've already reviewed on the chapters and have to find one you haven't please update!

I hate rei

You bitch rei you told sapphire on purpose so that would happen

If anything, Sapphire's death is Serena's fault. She never informed Darien of who else saved him or gave a description of Sapphire. He should have been informed. I may be looking at this from a different view, but I am saying that Serena is the reason why. I look into the small details... "

But good story so far and hopefully this isn't on a permanent hiatus

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Wow, just wow. I took a peek at this fic even if I new I would just end disappointed as it is still "ongoing" and has not been updated in more than 9 years...but I could not help myself.
I really like the way you have used the different characters, they are similar to cannon up to a point however you cannot predict their role just by reading their name. Love the way you developed Raye and Darien, but not so much Serena (don't worry I just hate when I can't grasp the character and I find your Serena too unstable).
I'm curious as to how you wanted the story to go, wishful thinking I know.
Thank you for sharing your work!

Wow! This is incredible! And I've only just seen that it's been 8 years since it was updated! (Sob!)
I really really hope you haven't given up in this story because like I said before it's incredible! I do have a lingering thought though, that I fear might not get answered, how did Saphire know that Serena was pregnant in the first place?

I can't believe Serena and Darien love each other so fiercely and yet they are both blind to it completely! It's quite sweet but and the same time insanely frustrating! Grrrr!

Slightly weird comment coming up... but if he were to love me like that I would willingly give myself up to him. And I'm sure A LOT of other fans/women would secretly and openly agree with me. He can bite me any day of the week! Lol. Please please update this soon! I live in hope :-)

wow great story...sad that you've stopped writing it.

It gets interesting each chapter.. I love it..

This is definetely a wonderful chapter.. I love it..

Ohh i definitely love it..

I've just re reaad this for the millionth time please please please update :) love love and i cant review on certain chapters as ive already reviewed haha

I really hope you return to this story! Even if you just tore out my heart and then stomped on it for what happened to Sapphire. Seriously, you're leaving us with that?! COME BAAAAACK!

Omg! U REALLY need to finish this story. Please!

so good