This is really good and the banter is excellent and I am invested in the story.
Callum Blue was really great as mason, and I'd wanna smash even in 2018.

Ok, so I've read this story a couple of times the last year, and is still so awesome! Characters on point and storyline captivating. Makes me wish that the series had continued, and had included thisyour writing is fabulous!

You are a ridiculously amazing writer. This was fantastic. I'm not ashamed to beg for more from you. This was awesome

Holy Shit! Wow! You've just made me a Mason/George fan. I didn't think it was possible.

Sweet baby Jesus you gave me a heart attack. Imagine finding your name in a FanFiction about reapers...

Awwies! They kissed! Yes!

Kiss. Kiss. Kiss!

Oooo Who?

Awwies I really like this series so far! Seems promising and Mason is so adorable!

Rube didn't reap George. The old black guy in the first episode reaped her. She was his last soul to reap before he got to move on. And she took his place.

Daisy you damn bitch! But good story so far...:D

im completely in love with this story! 3

I totally agree (about needing to pare down the dialogue). It's actually why I haven't gotten to posting the smut yet-I got into a posting frenzy and then realized I needed to rewrite some stuff (from Chapters 17 on).

I hope to have it leaner, meaner and better in time to get to the good stuff in the upcoming week. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Blarg, just as is gets to the *really* good part! Where's the next chapter?

If I were to have one criticism, it would be that George and Mason talked too much for my personal taste toward the middle of chpt 22. It felt like the conversation got a little long and was explaining things that the characters didn't know but the reader already did. So it felt repetitive.

One awesome part was Mason standing in the doorway when George realizes he's deciding whether to stay or leave. It completely resonates in chpt 22 from where he says "Well, I suppose I'm still trying to sort that out at the moment, aren't I?" to "What the fuck?"

Chpt 23 hot kissing is hot. :)

I really enjoyed the new chapters. Looking forward to more.

ahhhhhhh *high pitched fan girl scream* how can u end the chapter before it got to the hot and steamy *pouts*