Reviews for You Can't Always Get What You Want |
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aviesee chapter 8 . 8/12/2019 loved this story. it was funny, sweet, and romantic. thank you! _ |
MathewPL chapter 8 . 4/7/2019 My God what an amazing story. There should be more stories like that one! Good work! |
Reedz22 chapter 8 . 3/27/2019 Amazing |
jtscores chapter 8 . 8/4/2017 This is definitely one of my favorite fics. Will be patiently anticipating the next update. |
lightfuture chapter 8 . 12/5/2016 You have skills. Write your own story instead of fanfiction. |
guest chapter 8 . 12/4/2016 Hinata must be an elephant then... |
lightfuture chapter 1 . 12/4/2016 Woah! I've never seen a better written angst chapter. Good work. |
my 2 guys chapter 10 . 2/17/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |
Guest chapter 10 . 10/5/2015 Hello old friend, glad to see you kept at this story. I'm done with fanfiction, been done for years, but it's nice to dip back in memory lane as an adult nowadays. |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/7/2015 I am a naruhina fan but the characterization that most fics that I have read have hinata with the backbone of an amoeba,and angsting about "Naruto kun only sees sakura" or "I am not good enough for him" or "Why doesnt he notice me" and not even talking to him then some more angsting about it and its making me want to guys gonna say that her childhood messed her up or her fathers shitty attitude thumped down her self esteem into the sewers and I call bullshit,Ive known some guy whose self confidence issue is such that he cant even walk inside a church to attend service and instead stand outside in a blindspot near a window so he can listen to the preacher and hes shown more guts than hinata did in most fics. yeah just ranting,needed to blow some steam off after watching something called ran-sem,damned things got me in the emotional dump,anybody else fell that being emphatic w/a fictional character is being to much emphatic? |
EagleJarl chapter 8 . 12/19/2014 Awwww. That was sweet. I was surprised that Tsunade gave the five minutes - that's a heck of a long time to leave two teenagers alone! Also, there's something really funny about summoning the Boss Toad to help you break into the girls dorm so that you can get a goodnight kiss and do a panty raid. |
EagleJarl chapter 7 . 12/19/2014 The scene in the dorm was great - very believable humor, good pacing, well handled. It was nice to hear Sakura get a little put down; she definitely deserves it. Tsunade's "let's take this outside" trick was classic. First time I ever saw that was in a Garfield strip, ages ago. It never stops being funny, though. |
EagleJarl chapter 6 . 12/19/2014 Awwww, watching Naruto show Hinata off was just ridiculously sweet. It's nice to see it coming together and to see Naruto thinking a bit before he speaks. At the same time, I'm glad things aren't just perfect - he still makes her nervous, or goes a little across the lines of her limits. Feels pretty realistic, although I'm not clear on how old they are supposed to be now - mid teens? The distraction of the guard was cute. That woman is terribly at her job - a kid should not be able to lure you off post that easily! |
EagleJarl chapter 5 . 12/19/2014 Yes! Finally! |
EagleJarl chapter 4 . 12/18/2014 YES! GO HINATA! Kick his stupid damn butt! My GOD but that boy has rocks in his head. I hope he finally clues in. |