T_T This almost made me cry. I read a lot of fanfics where Yami is upset over the Orichalcos, and Yugi forgives him. I think this is the only story I know of where Yugi doesn't seem to do that. It's heartbreaking. Thanks for this, though it's terribly sad.

Chao- Nicely written one shot.

Whoa... this is what I get for browsing profiles! Heh, It's a tad bit shorter than most of your other stories, but who cares? IT IS AWESOME!

I think about this ALL the time. & now, today (Saturday, Jan. 29)is the day Yugi comes back. Except, only to fight Yami. This makes me REALLY sad, & so I'm glad you wrote about it! I hope you continue to write about Yami this way!

AW! That's all I can say. Short, sweet, to the point, sad and beautiful. You are deffinitely an author worth keeping a watch over ~_ I'm looking forward tomore stuff from you!

Shibby

Kitana: It could have done with being a bit longer and a tiny bit more detailed, but for a one-shot, very good. One thing that I've noticed in your writing though is this. It's just a small technical error, nothing major.. anyway..

I've noticed that, like myself, you like to use the whole [...word] thing. Well, I thought it was supposed to go [... word] with a gap after the dots. Am I right? So really [way...you] should have been [way... you]. Sorry if I'm wrong.

And I also agree with Kitkat Spellcaster, Yami would have used fancier and longer phrases *rolls eyes*.

But overall, very good.

Wow, I'm amazed with the power of these short stories and how incredibly well they are written. This is amazing, you add such powerful feelings with the stories that you write. I'm amazed.

Well done! What a powerful story!

o_o you... did it. this is what ive wanted to write ever since i saw that ep, but could never get it right (that, and i have other fics i should be working on -_-) *glomps* THANK YOU! !

Anhksenpaaten: *clears her throat*

QoH: anou... _() yeah. anyway, i must say that i havent seen past that one since ive been away at job corps *cries at her lack of access to new episodes* so... were they able to get my Yugi-chan back? please tell me this is so! ive been freaking out over here!

Anhk: Perhaps you could focus on the story at some point in time, hikari...? *raises a brow*

QoH: _() gomen nasai. i thought your characterization of Yami (who im still steamed with, even tho i do feel bad for him... its very strange) was fantastic *nod, nod* thats about all i can say, given my current situation _() kudos!

...beautifully written, and considering ive only reasentally seen that eposode, i can remember every detail. Poor Yami, poor confused yami, and i could go on, but right now i dont what to be that annoying.

it was sweet, but not quite Yami to me. He would bring up memories, and go on and on and on, but some of the things don't seem in character, like "i trusted you then, and u nearly died." Im not very good at interpreting Yami, but i would imagine it would be something like "I put my faith in u , and because of me, u nearly perished." But still, that is exelent per usual.

I loved it! continue! I love YAMI! he RULES. hes got such a nice voice... now if only he wasn't so hooked up on cards.. ya know? i mean hes strong.. y doesnt he just fight with his hands instead of flimsy cards XD. yeah, my friend asked me that, and I'm like-

Brian- how come they always use cards? why not their own fists? i mean, they're strong, so why the hell not?

Me-... cuz they are chicken. or something. I DON'T KNOW!

Brian- -.- your philosophy is ver.. erm... i don't know either..

Very nice, his feelings are written so well. Nice job!

Aw...I like it...It's sad...

i-i Poor Yami. -sniffles- This was beautiful Chaos Flower. It made me all sniffly and sad i-i