Reviews for Curse of the Hana Scroll! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() O.O Sasuke: ... Itachi: Pft...that was...ha...I mean...hee...that...ha... Sasuke: -DEATH- |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do like the strange twist of reality for sasuke. Guy to Girl. Woo, pwned. But, your writing needs some seirous work on it. Maybe I can help you edit your chapters before you post them or something...like that. My emai's harshraj if you need help. Keep writing, you can get better! |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha good chap please update asap. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the idea for the fic and would there be a certain pairing cause I like kakasasu narusasu and someother...-; err right The charater were slightly occ though but that ok. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting and funny |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha another sasuke turn in to a girl fic its so rare to find one. good fic please update soon and please try to make it a little longer than the other chap ok? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heheheheeh! Sasuke is a GIRL! Hillarious! Update soon plz! I really like it but you gotta work on your writing skills. They aren't bad it's just when another person is speaking/thinking/blahblahblah could you try to put the speach/sentence on the next line? It's easier for the readers to read in that way. The plot is well... FUNNY! I loved it and I'd I'm sure it'll be a success just remember my tip! P.S: This is not a flame just trying to help |