Oh my gosh. I really don't know what to say.

This story was so beautifully written. The emotion, angst, realism, I loved it all! There wasn't one part that was awkward or didn't flow together. I'm amazed. And currently crying over the laptop. (

Thank you for writing this, for making their relationship not perfect, like so many fanfictions about them are. (Did that make sense..?)

Gah. I'm still crying :'(

Now I have to go find some fluffy fanfic that will cheer me up...

But really, thank you.

I really liked this and it was SO sad.

That was heartbreaking. Every word of it. You are a genius and I have much to learn in the art of angst.

Wonderful job. Realistic, awesomely emotional details and descriptions. Miroku's inability to sleep yet his everpresent vision of hopelessness last chapter was like a dream. The freedom connected with despair that he felt when she dropped the ring to the ground was a surreal feeling of conflicting emotions, yet so very real.

Your characters and portrayal are complex and multi-layered; you paint it so that its not just one person's fault here. I love Kagome's inner conflict of who's side to take last chapter; things in InuYasha are usually so simple and black-and-white its a rare honor to be able to read something like this. Best fanfiction I've ever read, hands down.

You've inspired me after months of writer's block; thanks.

My heart... is WRENCHED from my friggen chest. It was beautifully convincing, and it absolutely broke my heart with every sentence. It was fabulous. Brilliant. You were so convincing with their relationship, adding elements and dimensions to scenes where you didn't even have to say more than what the characters said. It was amazing how you slowly opened it and had her finding out the truth the hard way, yet she was so afraid of admitting it to him that she had found out. I can't even describe what I want to say! And I'm a friggen writer! It was astounding. Astonishing. Please, become a professional writer some day. You moved me with your words!

omg you suck sango and miroku belong togetha!1one

Sorry. XD Wow, I love your writing style. It's really quite a lovely, constantly flowing story. Congrats, you're a talented writer!

I have to admit, I thought I was one of those "Sango and Miroku or bust" sort of people, until I read this. It just seemed so plausible, as you said, and everything fit and made sense. In this chapter, I loved the line where you said 'Freedom swept over his body and weighted him down to the ground.' So beautifully ironic.

I think I'm officially addicted to your stories. So I'll be expecting more from you...soon.

aw...i love this tory!

its not like ur other ones...at all!\even tho i do PREFER sango miroku stories i always try something new...if it was a sango and kouga story i wopuld still read it if it was well written.o...opps...i have to get ready and do a ten minute wlk to my buds house...im still in my pjs!oim supposed to be there at 9...am...now its 8:50!

ono!

ok...byby!

g2g get ready..in 2 seconds...ok...bi

Beautiful... Simply beautiful. Sad, yes, but beautiful. The setting fits so incredibly well with the story... You've done a lovely job with the MS pairing. Amazing work.

Grr... I hate the fact that you write such excellent sad stuffs! I much prefer the happy-go-lucky childish happy endings and fairy tales, and yet you keep drawing me in and torturing me with some of the greatest drama ever! It's not fair! It takes like five comedy fics to cheer me up after reading one of your excellent pieces of all that is human. Wonderful job. Now I have to go cheer up. I loved the fic! TTFN, ta, ta, for now!

Sincerely Fox-chan ~.

The end. It's so...final.

Sango's emotions were very real, and her outburst was painful. But...I guess that's the way things are. Damned, poor, messed-up Miroku.

Good job!

As much as I love the SanMir pairing, there's no way to deny that this is an awesome story so far. Your writing style is absolutely beautiful; the way you word things is so powerful and beautiful... I'm completely in awe. Not to mention that it was wonderfully in-character, and very, very realistic, as sad as it was.

RAWQ ON

Loved it, just loved it! I'm not a happy ending person, and I love reading heartwrenching stuff, truthful stuff like this. Amazing imagery, perfect dialogue, and the end lines were wonderful. Broken, a good word.

Amazingly amazing.

- Ebony

I get the feeling you watch a lot of soap operas... But, none the less, no matter how horrible this story is, it's still an awesome story. Although that made no sense... but, I won't say you didn't warn me.

Tu es vraiment mal.

~Amethyst~

Aww...that really was so very sad. But so very lovely! I was just wondering...what does the french in the chapter titles mean? I don't speak a word...

one word...wow. that was a deep story and your right it could happen to any relationship. i really like your writing style as well. keep up the writing.