I really love this short. The ending is great and decisive and concludes very symbolically the last battle the two seem to have. I love the indulgence comment, I love the little stabby sentences like "The Good Lord... chase". Everything feels real and is really powerful. The snark is delightful, the lime is delightful, and 'tis a shame H/J didn't win you over, because you really did them a solid. I've read and reread this work over the years and it stays with me always. Thank you from the bottom of my soul. Thank you!

It is a very good fic. It is hard to get in the way you did the relationship between two entities so deferential equal and complex as they are. Not to mention the dilemma that his is pure attraction and that are always pending on each other of any tactic that might be considered suspicious.

Besos. No doubt a sensational fiction.

Wow, I'm surprised. You've captured their personalities perfectly, every word, paragraph, everything ... It's incredible. This is one of my favorite couples and I was very happy to have read this fic, relatively perfect, as I imagine, their relationship. There is no vulgarity in the way, is more like you treat him in the fic, a prohibited relationship and realistic, because you do not love suffocatingly but feel an attraction to the other and yet, none forget the side which is and has extreme care ... We can say that without any doubt is perfectly canonical. Fascinating.

Congratulations on this amazing fic, really.

Kisses and hugs.

Beautiful I love it

I've always loved Hao, I used to hate Jeanne. But I love every little bit of HaoxJeanne I can find. Can you believe it? O.o Besides, I -know- that Jeanne is far too young (she only 8, people! 13 towards the end of the manga!) and I -still- love HaoxJeanne lemons or hints at it. I'm hopeless -.-U and then I guess you're, too.

Still, HaoxJeanne lemons/limes rule u all ppl. And I don't see why you don't like the ending O.o

Very well-written, and not too OOC. ) great job

Wow, this is really good! I like your style! I thought the ending was fine! I really love how you write!

i REALLY liked this. HaoxJeanne. The glory!

I love angelxdevil things. XP Sort of why i like Haoxtamao

Or.. maybe i just like Hao? :D

Was so beautifully written, i could sort of imagine i was seeing it. Although.. i'd rather not O.o