Im...just wow. This is everything. Im in love with your writting.

Ah this fic was so good. I love the sense of longing and incompleteness you used throughout the fic, and even when Naruto & Sakura get together its still there - really symbolises where the serious could have went if Sasuke was never redeemed. Loved Naruto sleeping on her sofa, it reflected an almost co-dependent side of their relationship we see constantly in the manga. The bittersweet ending was perfect. A beautiful fic, thank you for writing x

I love this fic! It was very well written and in character. The bittersweet ending was really fitting, I can totally picture it in my head. Wonderful writing

This was undeniably and absolutely perfect. I know it's been years and the story has flourished into something new altogether, but this was still (to me) very true to Naruto and Sakura and the tale of them all. Your writing was superb. Your execution was flawless. And the final line after the "end" tied it so well together. I loved this. To pieces.

Well done! I love how time seems to flit and flow in this - how things pause just for moments, but skip ahead in others. And it all without jarring.

Wonderful writing. Thank you for sharing!

This is beautiful

Joele

Hiya! This is such a wonderful and in character depiction of NaruSaku.I usually read SasuSaku, but I also enjoy NaruSaku when I want to read about a guy who is a total jerk (sorry Sasuke)

I really like the pacing of this story. I read this with "Clair de Lune" playing in the background. It felt very realistic but dreamlike at the same time. You could tell Sakura was falling in love, but it was subtle and sweet. Very well done!

I think I would have teared up if Naruto hadn't come back; it leaves you with this feeling of something entirely real. It goes without saying it'd be faved.

great story

Wow, this was an amazing story. I really loved it!

It's hard to express how moved I was-the story started so right at the beginning of their loss, and I could remember how their faces looked in the anime and feel you explained it better than any bittersweet expression. Then those parethesises would come and I really experienced something that I felt I knew,but I never would have been able to really expalin. Your story just flowed into Sakura's gradual acceptance and the next thing I knew, Naruto left and I was sobbing. I didn't expect to cry, and I'm crying now...I'm just going to favorite this.

That was very good. I'm impressed.

This is one of the most beautifully realistic NarutoSakura pieces I've seen yet. You managed to include a character study along with a catching, realistic plot and keep them in proportion, which is something very difficult to do (from what I've seen, the character study swamps the plot, or the plot makes the character study seem anticlimatic). A wondrous job.

aww..this was a good story

Wery wery nice.