Reviews for Living Sunshine
Guest chapter 2 . 2/12/2018
For some reason, I hate Naruto's character
Foxyramen2020 chapter 12 . 5/21/2016
Hahaha that ending though! XD "and they fucked like rabbits till god knows when." Lol I damn near pissed myself when I read that! Your a great writer just try to keep your events in order plz I was a little confuse but figured it out in the end! Good job 7/10
yaoilover chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
I love this! !
Great ideas in it to xxx gonna go check out some more
MikoKitty182 chapter 12 . 1/29/2011
NO SEX! *anime cries* How could you end it with out sex?
MikoKitty182 chapter 3 . 1/29/2011
Try fucktard. Thats my personal favorite.
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 12 . 8/23/2009
Nice story!
fucked-up-bitch chapter 12 . 6/11/2008
that's strange ending you know...

good stroy though

i didn't really understand the last chapter but that's probably my stupidity...

good job!
WithinThePoetsShadow chapter 12 . 6/11/2008
Um ... didn't Naruto already tell Sasuke that he killed people? Or is it because he lost part of his memory when he found out about before he got amnesia like the psychiatrist said he might?
WithinThePoetsShadow chapter 10 . 6/11/2008
Ah, sorry to keep pointing ouyt these things, but in one of the other chapters you said as a footnote that Narutos dad never raped him ...
WithinThePoetsShadow chapter 7 . 6/11/2008
I love it!

You've just sort of changed something about Gaara along the way. Nothing really important, but ...

Ok, in the start of the story, it was like Gaara and Naruto didn't know each other. Gaara already went to the school and commented to Sasuke that there was a new kid, but now he's Naruto's twin.
fucked-up-bitch chapter 4 . 6/10/2008
makes me want to cry ...T_T

but very kinky sasuke-:P
plushie-yaoi-luver chapter 2 . 6/10/2008
I love your story so far!

sasunaru is almost as amazing as sasugaa

good job!
MULAN-IFUWEREGAY chapter 12 . 5/31/2008
update soon
penguins-ate-me chapter 12 . 12/10/2006
AWW~! That was just so cute and sad at just the right parts. There were a little grammer errors but who really cares? P

AND GAARA'S MINE!
FigmentedReality chapter 12 . 8/15/2006
fucked like rabbits until god knows. GEEZ. Really OUT there. It's like he went on his computer. His girlfriend walked in. He gave her a kiss. Then they ran to the bedroom and made babies. GEZZ. Lol. Humorous though. Overall this fic was great.
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