THIS IS THE BEST FUCKING STORY O 'VE EVER HEAED! I was literary CRYING BECAUSE OF HOW SAD THIS STORY WAS AND HOW BEAUTIFUL IT WAS.

Oh Lord help garra! Plz and thank you

OMG the end i cried...personaly i dont mind the supernatral or ghosts unless they are messing with me...if i were Gaara wen i first saw the Haku distorted ghost i would have pis*ed my pants

I really like your stories of haku and really like it when you mix haku and horror together it just fits AWESOME is all I have to say

Wow... what a good story! This one had me uptight the whole way because of the way you wrote. It wasn't terrifying, but it wasn't not-scary. Nor was it creepy. I can't really think of a proper adjective, but I'll say that it chilled me to the core from the very beginning. You have skill.

And if this was the changed ending, what was the original supposed to be?

-DdK

Aw man, now my homework is all wet,

this is one of the most touching stories i've read in a while

hands down!

love love love!

oh wow...that's, that's...sad, sweet, it's a good end to a good story.

holy crap, thats his mum?

i wonder, being posted when it was do people get to read this

you wouldn't be happening to try to publish a book would you

because you should look into it

truly!

this was wrote like it had been by a famous author

i look forward to reading some of your other work

I've admired this story for a long time. :)

wow. just...wow! you can't imagine how impressed i was by this! the details, the story, just everything was incredible! it was better then most published books i've read!

again, BEST STORY IN THE WoRlD! Love it soo much! such a good plot, and the emotional content was amazingly powerful!

In chapter 5, during the part when dead haku came after gaara, my stereo actually started freaking out and going all staticky and it freaked me out! again, LOVE how you write.

o m f g, this is the best story in the entire frackin WORLD! EVER! love it!

Very well written! Great job!

~Yuko~

oh cumon! he dies? that so unfair! :(

and like wats up with haku? im gettin a hint of gaara being gay...