Too bad you never did a follow-up story with John's latent telepathic abilities.

yay i've been looking for this story for a while! love it love it love it! :D mega happy dance now i have to find the other stories i lost during my new computer shuffle...

Funny ending. Your older stories are pretty good.

Oh. I hate her the manipulative b****! Great story so far!

What I really, really love about this story is that you beat the series writers to the best bit of Doppelganger by over two years - the inside of McKay's head! And I liked your vision better, too ;-) Great fic, especially with the whole trust theme running throughout.

Very different from the ep, but I could see how both stories could be described with the same outline. I loved this story, and it was fun to see more ESP, since it's already a canon ability in SGA. I especially liked how you described Sheppard as having the Ancients ability, Ford their heart, and McKay their mind. The M7 cameos were fun too :P

Kavenaugh grimaced, staring around at the people he was with, not understanding the beatific expressions on their faces after meeting Straein.

LOL, McKay and Kavenaugh agreeing on something :P

"No…you just tend to misplace yourself."

Ah It's always so good to read your stories. I hadn't read that one yet. (Got distracted from my reading for a while, but now I'm back on the job! LOL!)

Well done! Keep writing!

Well, I know that it's been a while since you posted this story, but I decided to write a review anyway. :)

I was really into this story, and just *had* to finish it in one go, nevermind the Geometry :P waiting for me. :D

Straein- huh! Personally I'm not shedding any tears over her death, partly because I felt she kinda deserved it. Cold-hearted, I am. ;) That's what you get when you mess with Atlantis's favorite scientist! :) Thanks for this!

An incredible story. I really enjoyed the early chapters where McKay and Sheppard were at odds. Also liked all the scenes about trust. Very nicely done. Oh yes and I always laugh at your running jokes about the dark, unnamed doctor. Especially liked this exchange:

"No, major, I'm not Doctor McKay, I'm Doctor—"

"It's all right lad, he knows who you are," Beckett interrupted.

LOL - you devil you!

Small error: "Fixing the P-90 in place, the major turned to McKay and Sheppard"

Hi. I've read this story already and really enjoyed it. I noticed one error in this chapter that you might want to fix: "Kailin covered her hand with her mouth." Hand and mouth should be switched.

This was an incredible story, and the climax - the chase through the Atlantis of Rodney's mind - was very, very intense. You write very well, with a solid plot and correct grammar and spelling. I suspect you're also a fan of another favorite show of mine -

The Magnificent Seven; I trust you'll know how I know that. Thanks for a great read!

This was so much better than the ep! I loved it, and although Straein was awful for what she did to Rodney, she wasn't a bad girl really, just misinformed. I do quite feel sorry for her. You have a fantastic writing style and I am a big, big fan of everything you post. Being a Mag7 fan too, I love how you keep including characters like Inez. Dare I hope Ezra might one day make an appearance? *cg*

GOOD FIC!

I ABSOLUTELY loved it. :D

loved it