Very very nice! I love how you depicted Percy and I think I'll read a few fictions with this pairing! He was so kind and so in love ... Really, your fiction was very sweet!

Hello there! Percy huh? Fascinating, fascinating...
Cheers,
Isa

I found a slight inconsistency in your plot line. In this chapter you mentioned that Hermione is too young to do magic outside of school, but in chapter 3 you said that she was 17. 17 is the legal age to do magic outside of school, so she wouldn’t be too young.

It had its ups and downs, and I could have done without Percy, but thank you for sharing. I really hate women who run to the arms of another when they can't have the one they want. Very bad form, and not fair to themselves or their partner. It's almost as bad as women who stay with someone who's wrong for them just because it's expected of them or they don't want to be alone. I really wish people would stop writing Hermione this way like she's weak, wishy washy, and doesn't know her own mind. She should never forgive Ron for leaving them on the Horcrux hunt, and never settle for someone who is less intelligent and courageous than she is. Ok, that's my soapbox for the day, thanks.

Yep, but your Slytherins suck eggs.

Interesting pairing (Hermione and Percy). I did like your story overall but there have been a few things that were just a little too easy (like the Slytherins just suddenly becoming Hermiones friends, Percy is way too tolerant about losing her twice, the teachers approving of a teacher/student relationship amongst some others). I also suspect that you are American - not that it is a bad thing. It is just that you incorporate a few words and some things in your story that are clearly not British.

Hi, I loved it, but this last chapter you had Fred married to Katie, and then to Alicia, and it's a mess. But overall, très bon

Really beautiful story, had me in tears too. I rarely cry in stories so well done

Yay!
I actually enjoyed that.
Most SS-HG stories I don't usually enjoy but this one was quite good.
So far it's this one and that other story The Closet.
Cute ending and I'm quite glad that Hermione ended up with Sev!

I really like this smoothly flowing, gentle story.
Hmmm.. have noticed a few times, that you write 'anyways' for Severus.
It grates in my ears , because he is an Englishman, not American; it is a youthful expression, and he is highly cultured, mature, and takes pride in his hard-won accomplishments.
His wit is urbane, not callow or green. so , it just feels as if it doesn't belong in the outline...
sorry, but... had to write this tiny, little cough...
Otherwise , I adore the soft complexity. Write on...do...'S so enjoyable.
I like the shall/shall not between Percy and Severus. She is young and new to love,, of course she would want to sample different delights.

LOVED THIS!

It was quite good

That was very good!

I loved the 'battle of wits'! Really funny!

This was a really cool chapter - I like how they trick Molly!