I know that you'll probably never upadate this story, but for whatever my opinion is worth, and if you ever read this review, I like the idea of this story, and I think the 15 chapters you have are very good :) (I could picture something like this story happening in the real series)! It's rather a shame that such a good and promising story has been dropped, but I understand... sometimes inspiration for a particular project just decides to never strike again. But if this story ever continues, I'll be sure not to miss it :D!

awesome story i love it ! please please please please update soon

Wow...you know, a couple chapters back, when Dark was thinking about what it would be like to not have Daisuke there anymore...I cried. Call me a softie, but I actually cried. I applaud you for that.

Your writing style is simply beautiful. Very well written story.

With just one problem. It's been DROPPED. I'm not really expecting you to continue this after it's been three years, which is very sad. But...please? Do try. You dropped it at such a cliffhanger, too.

...You didn't die, did you? Gah, now I feel bad. You got in a car accident and died, didn't you?

I can't think of any other reason why you would have stopped writing.

Please, if it's at all possible, pick up this story again. It's great.

never mind my last review but please update this is an awesome story.

wait, one window seals and he's trapped? awesome story although there are a few errors

Well I was just going through reading some fan-fiction and came across this one here. It's been a really long time since you updated, and here I thought you said you would definitely finish this story, oh well.

Anyway, you really should finish this story if not at least update. It's really good, also you left off on a cliff hanger, so I really want to know what is going to happen next. I can see the story being finished in a couple chapters with out ruining any part of the story, maybe a few chapters.

Even though it is not finished I like this story a lot, and think that you are a good writer, so update the story if you get a chance.

AmethystNight88

You HAVE to finish this story! I absolutly love it and I need the insanity that can only be gotten from other authors!

KYAH! You need to update this ASAP! Tis excelent!

PLEASE!Update!

awesome story

please finish it.

sincerely,

bunny

YOUR STORYS AWSOME! I CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER.

PUDDING YES OR NO.

No! They fell off a cliff. Those types of cliffhangers are the most agonizing. Tell me what happens or I'll take away all your cookies! I'm serious...

no i want to read more i want to know what happened to the staff. i just finished reading all the chapters and i want to read more. T_T please update if this isn't done but if it is then oh well leave a cliff hanger.

o...u better hurry with the next update...ja ne

I must say I find your pleas for reviews cute, but as a fellow author I can understand. KIAH! Poor Dia, I love him to death, but just falls for things like this doesn't he?

hey love...

and to everyone else on this site listen up. this is her guy writing to you all and telling you to review ...leeayire's work. she really works hard at all this stuff. and yes she does loose things quite easily hahahahahaha a

so write and tell her how awsome her story is even though i don't understand all this.