Great story! Can't really blame Jayne. Who could ever say no to River?

The sweet side of Jayne. I knew he had one.

I'm seriously loving this series!

Ahhhh... I read this story ages ago and was so happy to find it again! Brilliant (as I remember it)!

As good as part one...love it!

Cute.

An intriguing partnership. I just wish there were more of these!

I love this. They're just both so in character. And I love the idea of nothing being the only thing River wants or needs and that Jayne can't bring himself to say no to her. He's such a softie underneath.

Simply incredible! You've captured Jayne & River beautifully.

Great story! I know I should say more, but at the moment I can't find the words. All I know is I've been there and done that, except for me it is the sea, not the black voic.

Oh, I read both in the series-only reviewed this one, sorry. LOVE them both; you have a distinct style to your writing, and nothing seems out of character. Brilliant, basically.

Very good. Sounds just like Jayne and River.

Oh, I loved this. Absolutely loved it. You captured River's nuttiness and Jayne's own personal war of selfish v. compassionate. So much love to this story.

This pieces are beautiful!

Very good. Now keep going. :)