Love your writing!

HA! Trapped in the elevator with the drugs Viagra and ecstasy in them not good. At least they made it out of the elevator and into the house first.

That would be them wanting thing's back to normal.

Good way to end it.

Just the right amount of humor.

Oh! I want to smack me! I had read this little, beautiful, charming, dainty, delightful, perky, pleasant, pretty story about a week or two ago, and I didn't reviewed because I was as far as possible of my computer! But I remember exactly!

I loved that! They have to deal with something what couldn't seems to happen! Not with those two keeping their reserved natural attitutes!

And back on the ground, Max was so 'Max-esque' !

And thank you to include Bling on it!

Please don't bring Zack into it.. The virus they had is still linger on for 72 hours and they have no knowledge of the time it lasts. But they have talked it over and its still doesn't matter because they become serious about one another.

Jeanette

Just a thought.

aww c'mpn... get them to agree to what happened and then shack up or sumthing...

ne wayz, you're the writer,and i enjoyed reading it regardless... and dont pos moving on slowly...please...

To bad your ending it here i really liked this story

I loved the story. It was so well done and you ended it at a perfect time.

Keep up the wonderful writing.

Wonderful story! And soo hilarious! I love it. It's not that I have stopped reading or caring about 'Moving On', but this one just lifts my spirits. Thank you.

great story,can't wait for the next up!

I can't stop laughing. This is so great. Who know you could do humor as well as drama, angst, action and everything else.

Keep 'em coming.

More!

Angel.

This story is excellent...!

ectasy and viagra... hehe...

so you're gonna continue right...? it doesntreally have to follow s1... orit could but with a few new twists...c'mon...?

This story is so cute and so funny. Keep those chapters coming.

you're not gonna stop there are you? well i hope more is on the way, i liked the little that was there and i hope there is more, i like the humor in it and your style is easy to read. i hope to see an update soon, keep up the great work.