Reviews for The Other Side |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Ralph... |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, I totally understood the part where she thought the little girls would think she was "dying" |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you haven't updated in six years but if you woul that'd be awesome! Its a great bit of writing that I definitely enjoyed reading. |
![]() ![]() ok wow its been like what 3 years since you last updated lol so i dont think you will now. but please! do this is an awsome story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Great job! I love this plot, you must update! Please! I'll hit you with my ap calc book, it would knock you out for days! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh come on, you have got to update! awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg. this story is amazing. i know its been a while, but...you really really need to update! please? ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() *cue voices* o, mysterious! Is Ralph in a comma or something? lol, keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please continue this story because the plot is starting to get very exciting. update this whenever u can. i'll be on the lookout! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I love your story! Please update soon! Come on Ralph! Go after your girl! |
![]() ![]() OMG PLEASE UPDATE! I just came a fan of LOTF by just reading it and school and I love it PLEASE UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very very interesting. i like how u hint at the whole coma dream thingy and how reading to a person in that state might in fact change their dream. i wouild also like to see (or read in this case) more of jack getting the crap beat out of him(hopefully by Ralph in the futur). anyway update soon. with kind regards Dan Ice |
![]() ![]() wow i love ur story i think its great i hope that Kathleen and Ralph end up together not Jack he is an ass hole ! urg! love it ~stars~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mwahaha I like ur story. I read it at once and i found it fantastic! At first I didn't like the so many changes u did, like time, the girls, etc. But I think i'll forget bout that coz u have come up with such a good plot! Yeah it isnt like an Agatha Christie's plot but it's quite good. Really u must have a good brain to come up with the 'family' thing, coz it's fantastic. I like how the girls are organized, i think we all would prefer to be with them rather than with Jack. The characters are very well dealt with, I love Claire and Ciara. You must write more! I am ANXIOUS to read the next chapter! Hahahaha congratulations and keep goin'! |
![]() ![]() I hope it doesnt sound too terribly harsh... if ur gonna rate a fic 'M' then make it 'M' matierial. I've read hundreds of fics, and this is barely PG-13 at best. Even if ralph did arrive on the island at age 14, he would know more than enough to know he was fucking Claire. It'd b nice if u took a few extra minutes 2 check ur grammar, since u did say u were doing this for us. N it would be nice 2 b able 2 tell what the hell is going on. -Lizz- |