This was best thing I have ever read

honestly this is the sweetest thing I've ever read..

I mean, a sleepy Kai is just so. da*n. cute!

Really, you fic's totally worth the work I've conveniently ignored in favour of reading it XDD Now, back to my enormous workload.. Unfortunately my teachers would definitely not let me off to sleep! XD

Kai's face-marks are face paint and this story was awesome, great job keep at it. make a sequel pwese

wao, i shall be the first person to review this story in 2010 XP anyway, WAO~! that was an awesome story, i just sat down and read the whole thing at one shot and... Amazing! XP

i like Kai more submissive anyway! beside the point. the whole plot line was pretty interesting too. although, to whose house did Tyson go to (since it can't be Maz or Rei) and what happened to the gathering of the BladeBreakers? other then that, i don't think i've got any more questions. the whole story was pretty sweet too! but when Kai and Tyson met the 'gay-hater' guy, that was pretty funny!

overall, awesome fic Divey-san!

I've only just found this but it was brilliant! So well written! You did a fantastic job!

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you know, i was just looking through my favourite stories and found this.

i cannot believe i forgotten this story existed

it is SO SO SO SO good.

gah! viva tyson/kai! haha!

thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing this story.

gah! fantastic! brilliant! *rants and raves*

well bloody done!

A-AMAZING! I know I should've been reviewing for my math test, but DAYUMN- I was totally engrossed by all 3 chapters that I just COULD not pull away.

You are an amazing writer. and I love all th ecrap you made Kai go through. Reading about his sleep deprived nights were hilarious (as it sounds more like myself, despite I have much less will and would totally extend my nap from 5 minutes to an hour..err..) but anyway~ I lvoe it. Love!

lots of aw's and wow's! this story was great! i loved it! ur right tyson is sweet to let the classes thing get away..i was waiting for a thank u too, lol...it's awesome! great story!

Congratulations!

Your story has been selected for addition into the C2 archive, “Polished and Shining!”.

Listing in this C2 not only determines your knack of storytelling and innate talent for the written word, but it may give you the recognition you deserve. Your hard work and determination has paid off, and your story is not only compelling, but shines as one of those rare gems that fanfic readers often search for in vain.

I humbly wish you the best of luck in all your future, written endeavors.

We, the readers and fellow authors, thank you for this unexpected pleasure!

Sincerely,

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P.S. Do not apologize for italics in flashbacks, in fact, don't title the flashbacks as flashbacks, just write in italics. Italics are pretty universal in determining that you are going into the past. Your readers will pick up on it (since every published book has the same layout), so don't worry. Do try to keep your AN's succinct because they do distract. If you have dedications and so forth, they should be left at the end of the story.

Also, try not to over explain things to readers (such as why you did this to this character and so on), again, most are intelligent and will understand on their own.

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Oh my gosh! I just wanted to tell you that this was such a wonderful story! The depth of everything just gripped at my heart from all the angst and love that shone through with Tyson and Kai. The humor you created even through the angsty parts of it really made me smile, and I loved all the flashbacks and memories there were of them getting ready to go to University and whatnot.

It was so real and believable. The characters were protrayed so wonderfully and magically that it made me jump from the greatness of it all.

And of course - I loved the ending. How Kai wasn't able to voice his feelings to Tyson, though the very last line just makes my heart flutter with joy! Thank you for writing such a wonderful story! It was amazing!

very interesting fic. how long was kai slleping anyway, after the teachers said kai could go home and sleep?

Wow I absolutely loved this AU fic! The parts when Kai was exhausted actually made me feel like I was half asleep. You did such a great job portraying University midterm times. Ah too bad I'll be in the midst of them in only a few weeks from now TT. Yeah Tyka! Their characters really worked well in the setting I thought. AU can be very hard to do without messing up the characters royally, but you did a splendid job. This fic totally made my night. (I actually recommend to future readers to start at 11 or 12 and just read it straight through into the night. Kai's rambling actually starts to make some wierd sort of sense o.o And then, by the end of the fic when he's all rested, you've gotten your second wind, and it all fits perfectly. Lol.) So I just wanted to say thank you for writing this fic! And best of luck on future projects!

According to the manga, Kai's face marks are face paint. Much to my disappointment. Because before i looked through the manga, I was certain they were tattoos!