Sweet and touching, with slight undertones of disturbing. Love it!

i can honestly say i didnt see that coming great work

Interesting story. I like the way how you discribe the charakters. The question is, will Keitaro ever find out or will Chiko tell him? You made a good work, thanks.

Wow, this story is just fantastic. Normally I'd be a bit iffy about brother sister romance thing, but the twist you put on how they met and the character development for Kanako just made me love it.

Excellent. I like the way things turned out.

I swore to myself i would burn my eyes if i ever read any keitaro/kanako fics. I would like to thank you for saving my eyes by writing said fic. The way you wrote this is so far from how kanako is percieved(not her determination, but her attitude and the way she show her affection) by having a plausable way for her to change everything about herself except for her determination to get the man she loves. I applaud you on a fic well done.

Wow, Kanako went through a lot to get Keitaro. You've written the story very nicely to show that she did it all for him and in a realistic manner which is amazing given the lengths she went to.

I can really only sum it up to wow...

brindani

This is my third time reading this story. I never get tired of it. It's very well-written and it's a great story. I just feel sorry that Kanako has to sacrifice so much. Still, I love this story.

Great story.

Wow...just, wow...

This is absolutely frickin' awesome. I was unsure of who Chiko was until almost the end. I finally caught on. _

Sweet one-shot.

Later,

MV

Wow... What a twist... Didn't see that coming

Awesome story

Someone who thinks like me! With the whole psychological aspect of incest, granted it would feel weird if I ever found out my wife was my sister. It's hard to break off from the norm of society.

This is top quality. I'm impressed, you should work as a storywriter. The story has a great dark atmosphere which fits it perfectly.

First off the alternative continuation comes in at a perfect time spot. The notes at the end clear this out and are very comprehensive and it is clear that author put a lot of effort in making of this story. The events that are author's fantasy fit in perfectly and are realy detailed.

People here said that they didn't know who was the person depicted in the story. Although the person's identity is kept in secret it's very easy to give him a name and even the correct one. Still the story is high class and I had great time reading it.

this is bloody good! i never would have expected the outcome of your story. i think it's clever and a bit frightening with what she did to herself just to be closer to him. this is really worth reading, i don't know why you have so little reviews. clearly it deserves more! you have talent for this sort of stories, please keep continue to share your ideas through your work!

Well well, that certainly wasn't expected. I'm kicking myself because I really SHOULD have been able to guess the twist; I noticed all the little hints that were telling me it wasn't who I thought it would be, but I didn't stop long enough to put them all together and figure it out. I would wonder whether she would be comfortable living the rest of her life as essentially a lie, but considering who it is and how things turned out for her I don't think she'll lose any sleep over it.

I agree with every one of the assessments you make at the end of the story, especially concerning the Urashima family. After noticing the omission in the last chapter of the manga, I always thought there was something rotten in that family tree. Other little hints throughout the manga imply that the Urashima's are one uniquely disturbed family.

In conclusion, congratulations. You've managed to construct a scenario which makes an extremely unlikely pairing workable.