Well that was an interesting story

Hopefully his new skills can compensate for losing kurama, against kage and god level beings he faces in the future (ototsuki)

Lame

why do people name the fourth hokage kazuma arashi it's minato namikaze

Time to find tsunade

Nice chap, kinda hoped for a more ownage type of fights from Naruto but still good

Nice chap, seems that sasuke may be able to compete with Itachi but what about orochimaru and his invasion? Did it happen and if not, the why didn’t it?

Nice start, though I know nothing of what is being added to Naruto in this instance

You somehow managed to make jounin level abilities slower than anything I've ever seen before, seriously. If darkness has used the "best illusions" on him then why couldn't he break out of that one much quicker, while I understand why she didn't attack, what I don't understand is why all the fights in this story are so slow. It feels like a turn based fight, one launches a jutsu then the other, repeat, add some feet and random yelling and bam. I'm not trying to flame, but you should be able to pick up these inconsistencies and weirdness and make a better story in the future.

Model people would say in response "but I receive tons of support", but that is not due to quality but rather pairings, romance, and "coolness" in a story.
Do not fall for their shallow reviews that, for some of the time, are for a reason different from quality and more for shock value/surprise something happened they remotely liked.

I never understood the whole "pervert hate" thing that many characters seem to have. Seriously, everyone is entitled to being a pervert when the choose, and they shouldn't be hurt or threatened because someone is being a hypocrite. Although Jiraya does take it a bit far with his constant peeping, it's fine to write those books, and to read them in public. I've seen so many stories where there is so much unnecessary hate from females on guys like Jiraya or Kakashi. Reading porn in public doesn't hurt anyone, and kids would learn about it eventually. Oh well, it's still a good story. I just felt as though I had to get the mini-rant out.

love it!

cool

Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue the story soon.

great 1st ch i see that you stopped writting thats to bad could have made a good story. but if you do descide to update caint wait to read it.

beautiful story!