ive never seen rin's stripes as orange in the anime The only colors her stripes are blue (When she was little) and purple (the color she mostly has)

So heartbreakingly beautiful :')

that was so painful

I gasped out loud when it was revealed as a dream! Emotional roller-coaster! Beautifully done!

T.T
Speechless. Crying. Heart wrenching...

I loved it so much it literally hurts.. Right above the left side of my chest
:'(

speechless. my fav pairing impressive writing style

perfect :)

FAVE!

Wow. I with kishimoto wwould put in a fraction of your love in his work, specially concerning Kakashi. He's amazing and so lonely. Anyone would be thrilled to be with him, but he choses to be along. Why? It's not that he cant love, because he has a big heart. It must be that he is still in love and can't let go.

They're purple. Purple is the best colour. This is beautiful. You can practically feel the love they have for each other. It's so sad at the end like no one will ever understand how heart broken he is :( And I looked up the songs and I like Cold Water better but their both good! :)

Hi, wandered in through a fav link. :) I'm not a fan of KakaRin myself, not quite yet anyway - and this story was rather building on an existing relationship than showing me how it came to be originally, which would be easier to learn. Poor Kakashi, hate to see him sad.

But it was a nice peek into his background via current events. It's a shame we never find out what made him see dreams like that, with such strong realism ("she's just proven she's real"). The only thing that gives away this must be a dream is that he never asks where on earth she's been in the meanwhile. (Either it's a dream or he died due to an acute brain bleeding on the roof.)

Thanks for this!

it's been a long time since you wrote this but i still feel i should leave feedback because to put it simply that fic was beautiful to read. you use of diction is incredible and the way you managed to draw the reader into the story and make it feel so emotion to the reader is amazing and not an easy feat. i've never read this pairing til now but i almost teared up at the end there when it was all a dream. I also loved your characterization of kakashi and think it is pretty spot on in the realistic romance department; as in i feel this is what kakashi would act like if he were to find romance. anyway great job it was an amazi ngly touching story, beautiful job.

-Filly8

Damn. That was beautiful. I feel so sorry for Kakashi and Rin.

this is so good. Kakashi and Rin is my favorite parining. Great story and very well written

You wrote this over five years ago, who knows if you still even access your account? I just thought I'd say your story was great and you described Kakashi's personality to my standards. It was nice to see a romance not involving yoai. I don't know if my comment matters but your story made me smile tonight

I doubt Kakashi ever loved Rin in a romantic way. :/ I doubt Kakashi will ever love anyone in a truly romantic way, actually. So, this was extremely unrealistic to me.

Other than that, Nice story.

Beautiful. Simply beatuful. I actually teared up even though RinxKakashi isn't one of my favorite couples. (That's a compliment! :D) This is probably the only oneshot I've read that I don't have some kind of issue with XD. I was wondering if I could use some of Rin's lines in my own fanfic, with a credit to you in the A/N of course. More precicely, "Good things do happen, Kakashi. It's not all blood and loss," and "It can't be, or the stars wouldn't shine," with a word altered here and there. If you do grant me permission, it would be greatly appreciated! Keep writing, I'd love to