beautiful imagery.. but sad in a way.. makes you wonder if thats what rai was really thinking as his last days flew by.. xx

(AH! Now that I have (finally, it's been six month -) read the third book, I can read your Diabolo fics without fears of spoilers)

I like it. Really (in fact I love all your work that I read)

I liked the 'demon inside of the mirror' and the description of the beauty of drowning.

And I like when he dies laughing in his dreams.

You and they deserve hugs.

You always write such sad Diabolo stories...But I like em!

What is it with you? You keep writing an absolutely dead-on Rai, the thoughts he has beneath the mask he wears to keep Ren safe and to ignore the taste of blood in the back of his throat, the fangs he wakes to find in his mouth after a bad hunt.

Woah, that's a great way to put it n_n maybe I should print this out and show it to ShimaGenki... She gave up trying to understand Rai, but you put it into such understandable and poetic phrasing n_n Hurrah! Have a cookie n_n

I've read this story over and over again, & it never fails to touch me. Everything is -vivid-, and real, and I think the word 'beauty' really fits this fic... It's just amazingly gorgeous. Every single word of it.

...though I have a special fondness for the ending. Your ending lines are always spectacular.

Oh wow... there was something so... very Diabolish about it, definitely. Well well well done, and I, the ever loving Rai/Ren fangirl, loved the line 'he protected ren with all that was left of his sanity'

I coudl see that... him turnin insane... but there was definitely something beautiful, and I loved that 'the sky was falling...'

excellent, well written! Interesting fic!

that was really eerie but still good.