Reviews for History Repeats Itself |
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![]() ![]() Perché non lo continui |
![]() ![]() Perché non contimui |
![]() ![]() Perché non continui, non è normale |
![]() ![]() Fai le cose ha metà, non è normale uno scrive una storia per non completare |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter,please update more offten. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter,please update more offten. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far the story is great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was hoping that you would have revealed that Nabiki was the missing senshi. Oh, and I agree that Ranma defeating Saffron was more due to luck than power. Although, personally, I think Ranma could take on any of the senshi one-on-one. Well, with the possible exception of Pluto; but she's got centuries of personal experience to draw on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next and i would love to see more like this. Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, why aren't you working on this? this is a great story! it kinda annoying when people start writing a great story then leave it unfinished for years! 7/5 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your premise is good and the story seems well written, from a storytelling perspective, at least. For the love of Bob, though, get yourself a beta who DOES speak English as a first language! I wanted to continue reading but the constant flip-flopping of verb tenses and singular/plural is physically painful. I would love to finish reading this if you get it looked over by a native English speaker and edit it. -FerretShock |
![]() ![]() ![]() If the manga had gone on I would be waiting to see this in volume # 43-47. the manga left a lot of Questions to be answered. i see ten major questions. #1 will Akane and Ranma ever admit their feelings? #2 How will the love maze be solved? #3 will soun ever get his backbone back? #4 who will break first? #5 will akane get a curse? #6 will Ranma ever find a Cure? #7 if Akane get cursed do they get lock in the forms they hate? #7.1 If they do get stuck will Ranma-chan ever carry a baby in her? #8 why did Rumiko Takahashi left the story at what in could be only a middle point? #9 will it ever be continued? #10 will these questions and many more will ever be answered? |
![]() ![]() ![]() -If you need a sounding board, I can help. Just please, update this some time soon! Happy writing, and update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue the story soon. |