It's almost like a real episode. Very in character.

This part:

CAT: What’ll happen if one of those hits us?

RIMMER: It will gash a hole bigger than the gap between your ears.

CAT: Man, that’s sure one big hole.

Made me stop and laugh! It was SO MUCH like the show, I could hear the voices.

It was a very injoyable read, though I thought the ending needed a bit more of a punch, like some strange reason for Kryten removing the worm or something and the side affects of Lister having some of his brain eaten away.

Great, just smeging great. It's 'brutal'!

wow! thats really great. makes me laugh a lot. i was reading your profile and you said that you didnt understand a lot of the jokes on red dwarf. are you not british? just wondering. my american pen pal love red dwarf and she never said anything about not understanding the jokes. just curiosity you know. anyways, great fic. :)

Wow, this was good! All their personalities were in place, and Cat got more lines! Yay! I don't think there was any need to put it into script form, but either way it's very enjoyable! Write more fics soon!

Lol! That was brill!

I really enjoyed this fic! :D It reads just like a real episode. I can just imagine it taking place on screen! _ Keep it up!