Buena historia.

Un padre no es el hombre que procrea un infante, un padre es aquel hombre que vela por el bienestar de ese infante.

Es bueno que Lisa sea hija biologica de Homero.

Me hizo reir la frase de Bart, "Half-sister, cool". Parece que Bart encontro divertida la situación.

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Good story.

A father is not the man who begets a child, a father is the man who looks after the welfare of that child.

It's good that Lisa is biological daughter of Homer.

It made me laugh Bart's phrase, "Half-sister, cool". It seems that Bart found the situation amusing.

Hmm... Homer was a grade-A douche to Lisa in this story, I'm not sure why she's praising him at the end of it.

Actually, this is slightly unineresting. No offense, I was expecting them to say (you-know-who) was Lisa's father, then when she packs up to leave, she decides to stay with Homer. That could've been more "dramatic," as your genre says. :

Oh! This is good! The suspense is killing me! By keeping the reader in the dark you build the suspense without even putting the characters in any kind of danger or creating something that is a mystery to the characters as well! The glories of limited third person point of view! Can't wait to finish!

really good

cool cool.

wasn't there an episode where homer was found to have had a crayon jammed up his nose and in his brain? and when they removed it he was really smart and well yeah he and lisa got along great. or it could have been a dream but i highly doubt it.

There are no more chapters in this story. I left the end uncertain on purpose. Maybe someone else can write a follow-up story

Is there a next chapter?

Can't wait if there is!

Lisa's real father is...(spoiler deleted)? Hmm, no wonder he's so fond of her.

Omg, more! More! Please continue this is so good!

This is very good! can't wait for the next chapter.

write more...

Wooho! Sox Roxage! (I've finally lost it, or mabey it was never there..)