The first chapter was wonderful and excited me to keep on reading - I can't help but be a little sad though that it wasn't the inner monologue of Mamoru. It would've been an interesting outtake. Still I'm giving this story a shot and see where it is going

I really don't like Mamoru right now. Poor Usagi. I'm enjoying the first two chapters that I have read so far.

I know that this fanfic is complete, but I hope Mamoru gets what's coming.

*Sighh* Truly amazing, and a nice twist at the end. I'm glad it ended up UM. The whole plotline is genius and I applaud you at the brilliance. Truly a favorite.

Hm. Very interested in who Averill is. Also want to mention that this chapter was *epic*... the fight scene... talk about SUSPENSE! And now Usagi can't transform! Gah! Heh heh poor Rei, covering for Mamoru and Usagi ("I’ll even give her a kiss!"- I ROTFL... bet she regretted *that* one the instant it left her mouth!). Nick's pretty cool too; even *I'm* taking in by him, and I'm not even there!

Nice job; can't wait to read onward.

Yeesh, talk about cliffhangers! Right about now I want to punch Mamoru, though I certainly hope his behavior's just a ruse. If he's cheating, HOO BOY! I'll find some way to infiltrate the story and WHAM!;-D Hopefully this ends up U/M... right? Right! *Ahem* Anyways, off to a brilliant and intriguing start! I read this story years ago and accidentally stumbled upon it again, so it's like I'm rediscovering the wonder and the plot! I have no memory of the ending, so... it's gonna be one hell of a ride! :-D I also laud your grammar.

Great Story!

its a different story.. but i loved it!

it was different but a very good fic nonetheless!

unexpected ending.. but it is great

WOW, I never would hace seen that comming, baby Averill. Anyhow it was a sweet end to a nice fic.

i love this story i m so glad u finished it hehe thank u!

This is really good. I will wait patiently for more. Keep up the fantastic work. :)

~Moon-Daisuke

OMG! I forgot about this story, so happy to have found it again! I love it, and i am surprised you don't have more reviews cause this is like the best fanfic i have seen in a long time.

omg i love it! the story is so good, i cant wait to read more, who was the girl mamoru was with? the girl usagi danced with? are they both the same? update please!