I love your story, and wish you would continue it, but I would understand if you gave up on it. If so, would it be too much to ask for a reason?

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Why isn't this glorious thing updating anymore?!

I wish you had continued to write this it's really good

please update, it's great

This is reaaallllyyyyy fcking sloooowww

When are we going to see narutooooo

Quit overpowering villains to a laughable extent. If they are untouchable and can't be captured by a Sannin and can block a kyuubi chakra powered rasengan with a sword they are too fucking much. They will come and torment the hero through the whole thing without ever being seriously hurt. If you set up that kind of frustrating shit in chapter 1 i dont wannna see the rest.

Hah. Naruto survives, wakes up, has heart attack at the sight. Awkward.

Can't keep reading, it's well written and was interesting at first but I just can't get into it. Creating Bloodlines, Demon Seals, the Shiki Fujin working differently and even that Shadow Clone, sorry Demon Clone thing running out of Chakra is just stupid to me. A Shadow Clone that has been created can last indefinitely until it runs out of Chakra, you don't need to use any Chakra to sit in a hospital and chat so I don't understand how the Demon Clones which seems to be an upgrade has this problem. It's not doing anything so how can it run out of Chakra?

Hoo-wee! Look at that word count! And, wow! 2005? This shit is golden!

Arashi? I haven't seen that in a fanfics since-

oh this is 2005. No wonder.
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I hope the rec was not given as a joke.

Tsundere damsels in distress should just drop dead and remain dead. Ino's character is just totally unnescessary.

i cant wait for a update this is a unique story and would love to read more

that was good keep the chapters coming

I harbor a deep seated hatred for Ino. She's a self-entitled brat with little regard for privacy and boundaries. She lacks manners and restraint in her bossy attitude. As well as being unnecessarily violent and seemingly sexist. I really like this story, I really do but the way Naruto handles Ino makes me think of him as a pushover when he should be able to speak with Ino as an equal. If she has no respect for his privacy then why should he put up with that. Though this attitude and way of dealing with females of anime in general is widespread and appears to be a cultural thing. It grates on me when someone cannot respect boundaries and limits. My intense dislike extends to almost all Naruto-verse females and most males. But I commend you for the 9 chapters so far.