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Aw
I loved their portrayal
But cute

That was just such a good flut. I liked it.

its sweet .

Sooo beautiful and deep, just like their special relationship 3

I loved this! Awesome!

Great job!

very,very,very,very good.

That was extremely sweet, and with very classy sensual description. Seems in-character for both Roy and Riza, which is rare to find in fanfictions it seems.

Well done. I enjoyed it a lot, and would love to see more along the pairing from you.

Ooh. "Noot" bad.

OK, I'll drop the pseudo-Canadian tone.

I'll be honest: I don't really like Roy/Riza stories that get physical. That's the part of the pairing that has charmed me: it's so subtle, yet so obvious at the same time; there's no need for them to get all kissy or huggy, because you *know* the connection is there.

Having thrown that over my shoulder, I will admit I liked this. Good that you put the emphasis on the fluff rather than the smut, because that allows our two lovable officers to be the same snarky personas we're so used to.

- Phantom Kensai

Oh I hope for their sake that some day in the story you can assume that scenes like this are true. They are so beautiful together and it seems so right. :)

Cute. Almost unbearably so. Aw ... it's just so kawaii. Very well written.

THIS STORY IS GREAT !YOU SHOULD MAKE MORE OF THIS

MAYBE A NEXT PART WITH THE SAME TYPE OF SCENES A BIT MORE EXPLICIT

PLEASE!

a lovely, gorgeous, well-written, fluffy piece of smexy, I must say! Beatifully done, quiet like a moment in the eye of the storm, especially with everything that's going on in their public lives. Beautiful!

write more XD please XD

Perfect.

Short, but still very powerful. I like how they drop their masks for one another...s'cute.