A creative idea, and your stile is great.
Just one thing:
Why did Xander react so negative to thoughts that basically went „I dont have time right now!“ and „I wanna keep Xander out of the slaying!“, the latter of wich he already knew.

really well written, I loved it

Wow, that was ah. Hmmm that was certainly something to think about. I think WOW actually says it all. Can't wait to see how this ends.

I liked this, except the last couple bits, but mostly spike's end. I liked spike being killed finally, but I didn't really believe Xander leaving his daughter downstairs in the hotel office/lobby area, where *anyone* can enter with only Fred as protection, while he and cordy went out.

First they got WF&H who'd love to do something, but then there's the fact vampires can apparently just waltz right in freely. Fred is smart but she's no witch or slayer, and she's very naïve.

At the least they'd ask Amy to watch the baby in their private dwelling upstairs where I assume vamps couldn't enter, since it's their personal home. But beyond that I'd think, more than Angel, Xander would have gotten someone to do some mojo to keep out vamps, or a sanctuary spell like Lorne had or something so keep his family safe.

Granted canon Angel didn't even when Connor was a baby, but that could easily be down to jasmine or ptb interference, which isn't the case here.

But I did like most of the fic anyway, the ptb's and jasmine getting smacked down, nice changes from canon and so on.

Wow. Part one was great as a standalone, but part two was damn good too. I kind of wish you had done the Xander years in LA in more detail. Plus I would have loved to see Buffy and Willow's reaction to what their former best friend had become. Regardless of that, this story was still very enjoyable. Thanks!

I liked it. I'd love to see more, but it is good as is, overall, I guess.

Very interesting.

Very well written too.

this one was good to more to come eventually?

This story is bloody awesome!

Wasn't sure about the characterisation at first, but reading this the second time around helped me realise where it comes from. No complaints here.

Thanks for writing!

Awesome and thanks for writing.

very nice. i like how Xander went from Aspect of the demon to White knight of LA.

very well done.

cool

good story, byes

I like!

Although the first part seamed like it could stand alone I like how you have expanded on the original tale. The new Xander is intriging.

I hope you plan to continue this. I would like to see/read more.

Keep it up!

Well, that was amazing. Well detailed and thought out.