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Eyyyyy, thats a pretty good story you got there!

Sorry, no criticism! Too good for criticism! Very, very awesome! People are mostly in character—except for Sasuke, but nobody likes grouchy!Sasuke. Except the fangirls, but they don't count.

Ahem.

This was very, very cute. The lack of defined pairings (but lots and lots of hints) just made it better! Hooray for friendly romance!

But what's Sasuke going to do about a sword now? o.O

That was really good. I thought it was quite in character. Love the way you finished it, not too corny, and symbolic.

Did I already review this thing? I don't remember... but I'll review (again?) anyway! Whoo, go symbolism! I like how you incorporate the necklace and the sword- they're very... I don't know. Sharp symbols? Whatever they are, adds lots to the story. Plus, I like how you stayed true to Sasuke, and the messed up syndrome he has. All the characters were really realistic. Great job!

ack! go back and get the damn sword! still, great fic.

Well, now you get to be on my favourite authors too ) Beautifully written! Great great work! Keep it up!

Lovely. Gorgeous, in fact. And that last line is just perfect. C:

Very nice. Good job. And to think it was even unedited. :D

Hell no, no criticism. That was really good. Though, technically, I don't think it was SasuNaru, could just be really really really (really)... good friends. Anyway, loved the characterization (was spot on) and the final line was an absolutely perfect conculusion to an already great fic.

Good job

*goes to read more of ur stuff*

aw, that's so sweet! You described everything so well! And his thoughts are so completly sasuke!

Normally I don't like present tense stories, but all of yours are so skillfully woven!

Love it so much. D

Thank you for contributing to the small but growing number of NaruSasu fanfics.

This was so nicely written! i really loved it. Youshould continue this some how... you are an awesom writer!