WHAOOOO ABOUT TIME HARRY!

OMG Harry, is soooo thick...

This was sweet! I loved hormonal Hermione...

It was a nice idea, especially the play... but perhaps you could pay more attention to details the next time? Originally you said it was Harry who needed to go back finish a Transfiguration assignment, not Hermione...then in the very next chapter, you made it look like it was Hermione who was falling behind.

(as well as some other, minor details)

Other than that, it's a lovely story, and I must say I enjoyed the play and poem scenes... keep writing, you can only get better and better at it! :)

this is a great should really finish this off with a sequal.i love the way you bought them job

you don't know how long i've been searching for your story!

i was reading it two months ago when i got cut off from the internet, and i've searching for it ever since. i'm so happy that i finally found it. you are the an awesome writer! it's unbelievable! you don't know how cool your story is... i'm such a fan! I hope you make more like it... - Kuryu n_n

This is so cool! Though your girlfriend didn't help you write this chapter, I still loved it!

oh i almost cried nicly done.

Oh he always liked her too! How sweet! Loved the Red Underwear part! lmao I'm really glad they got together though, and you did very well I think on this little romance story! Great job and great story! I'm sorry to see it end so soon, but it was still wonderful. Hope I see more work from you in the future! D

Ha, they are finally together, about time too, i wa getting worried, lol, great chapter, hopefully it wasn't the last...update soon

I ship R/Hr, but I loved this fic anyway. You captured the essence of hidden love perfectly.

*dies*

That was so perfect. AND beautiful. AND cute. AND sweet. AND I LOVED IT! KEEP WRITING! I WANT MORE PUMPKIN PIE FROM YOU! D

This story is amazing. It has its serious moments then the more playful ones. I loved the underwear bit. Would you mind if I used something like that in one of my stories? Well, I really enjoy your writing and would like to see another great HP fic from you soon.

is that the end? thats sweet.

did they have sex or what?im so confused as to what they ...a little more i guess ill call it"adventurous" than im used to in hhr fics but more imaginative han i would have come up good though.-rachel