Reviews for Lessons of Mastery
Shayniskie19 chapter 1 . 2/16/2016
Swoon! You made me so happy. I love the details of the fight scenes and how each characters "issues" were resolved. I absolutely liked the fact that Kuno started dating Nabiki because I've always, always thought they'd be cute together. Very well done. Two thumbs up!
No one chapter 1 . 12/6/2015
An incredible story. It was a bit fast paced and everyone seem to change quickly. But still it didn't felt out of character. All in all, nicely done.
smashman42 chapter 1 . 6/15/2015
Well, that escalated quickly!

Not the impending battle with Cologne, Nodoka forcing the marriage at the end!

I really enjoyed the story, though I can see how not everyone might enjoy it as it was rather fast paced. Ranma changed in the blink of a eye and even with the 'I'm a master now, I need to grow up' thing, I'd have thought he'd have struggled and screwed up more. Out maneuvering Nabiki at every turn seemed a little unrealistic to me. Akane changed quickly too, though as that was in response to Ranma's changes I didn't mind it so much.
xThomas2 chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
Marriage, soon baby in carriage!
PepperonyOwl chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
Oh, what a lovely and so sweet story! I love how Nodoka tricked them into everything and then they started kissing and agreeing to get married! Very cute! Love it.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
love this.

this was perfect
shugokage chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Absolutely incredible story good job and thanks!
irfane chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Pretty great story. You got a lot done without seeming like you were rushing from one scene to another, and while some of the characters got punted off screen, you showed enough of their reactions to make their changes easily believable.

Also, particular kudos on your characterization for Kuno and Cologne.
sea1 chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
very nice story...and no OOC
ryu238 chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
The writing is average, and the characterization is off, for example, ""So how did you convince Nabiki to go along with you plan? She's not going to give up her cash cow, you dumb pervert," Akane replied loudly. She wanted him to admit that he had threatened to switch the engagement. How dare he?" She knows that Ranma threatened Nabiki by switching the engagement to kuno and was said to hear most of the conversation, so why have this at all? Also ""You're always on the fence. What's up, you pervert?"" When she is asking Ranma what's wrong, there is no reason for her to call ranma a pervert. In fact Akane constanly calling Ranma a pervert only happens when he is in compromising situations, which he isn't here! You are wrong. Also where did Shampoo find time to hit akane with that memory erasing tech, to forget Ryoga's curse, when earlier she did learn about it and remembered! Your explanation has holes in it! Also, where did the sudden maturity come from, you said it was because he was a master, but that is a stupid explanation! Finally, why would Happosai want to help Ranma?
Tetris Ex Machina chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Great story!
Merme chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
That was awesome! I loved reading it! :) I think you wrote the fights great, too, I could practically see them. :)
Steven Kodaly chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
Well done, and I say that with only a passing familiarity with the Ranma series.
Olaf74 chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
FictionWeaver chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
This has to be one of the first Fics that really got me into Fan Fiction to start with. I am not sure how long ago was the first time I read it, but I’m sure it was several years ago, even before you posted it to

It is a very entertaining Fic, a bit rushed I think, but still very enjoyable. I usually like stories where the author is a bit more descriptive about the scene as a whole, and specially the development of the characters. That said, it could also be overdone and turn the whole story dull. One of the best things about 'Lessons of Mastery' is that it never becomes dull.

I read somewhere that you are no longer doing Ranma Fan Fiction, it kind of makes me sad, sidekick and Lessons of Mastery are two of my favorite fics out there.

Keep up the good work.

FictionWeaver
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