Snape is not a victim

Harry should tell Ginny

Harry was not a bad friend, Hermione and Ron were the bad friends

Okay

Not sure if you'll ever read this but if so, please finish this masterpiece of a story!

Ahhh I was really starting to like the story! Its just starting to get really good... Would love to read the rest of it

Making more anytime soon?

Hmm very interesting. I like the trunk idea and Ginny/Harry isn't bad pairing. But did I mis something. Why is it metamorphosis? Is it off that book? Or ...?

Love the story! Update soon!

This is a really great story and I look forward to reading more of it as you publish new chapters. I hope things start to work out for Harry and Ginny soon-you're doing a really good job of bringing them together through friendship and I hope it will further develop in the next chapter or two. Also, don't forget that there's still the mystery of what happened to Harry for the eight weeks he was missing. It seems like after he got back no one really seems to care what happened to him, and I don't think it makes much sense to ignore something that was so important at the beginning of the story for so long. That's probably something you should address in the next chapter, if not to reveal what happened then to at least acknowledge that they are still thinking about it. If you don't it will seem like you're writing two separate stories. Please post the next chapter soon, and thanks for writing!

just finished reading the chapters made so far. Overall i think its a wonderful story. The motorcycle is a bit silly, and you have a tendency to have characters repeat names when talking, but i really like it. The rest of your idea's are good and the story is very interesting. I also like that you have long chapters rather than 400 or less words per like most i have read. keep up the good work and i hope that the next chapter comes soon.

Braveheart reference! High five!

Very enjoyable story! I look forward to reading more!

I just started reading your story, so this is my first review but I have to say I am really enjoying it! The mystery of where Harry went for eight weeks and what was done to him, combined with the other changes you are making in the original story are quite exciting and I'm definetly looking forward to reading more.

This is an excellent start to your story. I really like how you've made Harry more powerful, but have avoided making him invincible. I look forward to reading more!