cute. bvut whould the stones really say 'suididal death'?

Hahahah..i like your fic! Its really good.

except i thought it had too much song, not enough story.

Also, at the big "HI! HI! HI!" scene, i'm guessing its Ed talking, but why would it be only him and Hughes talking? According to your story, the various characters died at different times of the fic. Therefore, it would make a lot more sence if everyone greeted Roy and Riza becuase they were the last to die together.

meh..my opinion..xP

HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI HAPPY HAPPY HI HI hi!

Colonel Bastard... (laughs hysterically)

This is good! -

That was sad, yet really good. Keep up the great work.

DOES EVERYONE SERIOUSLY DIE IN THE SERIES! *cries, sobs* I liked your last verse...you're pretty good at writing!