Reviews for Aim
Chii chapter 2 . 7/3/2013
When you had Ed purr, it reminded me of pictures when he is a neko
Thoughts Of A Shadow chapter 2 . 8/22/2010
Aww! This one was so cute! I think I've read the majority of your other Fullmetal stories, but completley forgot to review on them! I love all of you work, especially Come Clean. That one was amazing! And this one! i love how you described ed as a cat, and that part about him being 'A dog of the military and he's a cat. He does love to be a contradiction.' I laughed at that part! I really hope you write some more one shots or a long story soon, because your work is amazing!

-Shadow
goldacharmed chapter 2 . 1/12/2010
I love what Riza said about why Ed was really there. That was really cool. But I wasn't really so sure how much I liked the whole purring thing. Although I do see why you needed it. All in all, another great piece of work. :)
TheChantalB chapter 2 . 8/25/2009
This is more like an Edward Elric story than a RoyAi... anyways... I've enjoyed it! :3
Unleash The Shadow chapter 2 . 8/24/2009
You are my new favourite FMA author 8D

I loved this. Ed, roy, and Riza's relationship is often overlooked. You got it down perfectly here 8D
edxwin is cannon chapter 2 . 8/8/2008
I like the idea of ed being badass with a gun. I am in an organization called Venture scouts (a branch of co-ed, high adventure, age 14 and up boy scouting group), and we shoot a lot. It is so much fun. I wish you had explained the weight loss and why they drugged him a little more. why did they drug him?
JessiTsuki chapter 2 . 7/21/2008
Your stories that I've read so far are sweet/cute and I love them. . You write very well.
WindSoul17 chapter 2 . 12/11/2007
I LOVE IT!

Wonderful story with an excellant explanation.
jenelric chapter 2 . 7/3/2007
squee! so cute!
kayter chapter 2 . 11/25/2006
lovee~

*just an excuse to add the story to her favorites*
Ginger Ninja chapter 2 . 2/20/2006
I can't believe I haven't read this before! It was really good. You write Ed so perfectly. And the end was so cute but you kept it from slipping into sap with that mention of Hughes. Wicked :)

GN
Pocket-Mandy-Mae chapter 2 . 8/7/2005
i like your story and yay for Roy and Riza! They are so good together! Keep it up!
tath-chan chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
Wow, I just stumbled upon your fanfic the other day, and what a gold mine of excellent FMA stories it is! *stares* Wow. And some Rurouni Kenshin as an added bonus, too!

This particular story might be my favorite, or at least one of them. I love all of them though! Your characterizations are wonderful, and I love the humor you weave throughout it all. Fantastic! :)

I'm quite new to Fullmetal Alchemist as a series, so it was great to spend a day getting to know the characters better through your fanfiction. Actually, I had a couple of questions about Fullmetal that I've been dying to ask someone... If you wouldn't mind terribly, may I email you these questions? (Two of them relate directly to some of your fanfic.) My email address is on my bio-page.

Thanks!
Sepheria chapter 2 . 6/9/2005
I love your story..ITS SO SWEET! A little Roy/Ed-ish or maybe just father like care...hehe...ignore me...I LOVED your story...Thats about it...

~Ja Ne~
KatieCat chapter 2 . 6/6/2005
Listen up and listen up good. You have an awesome story going on here and I personally would like to continue reading what is going to happen next. Don't let your reviewers down.
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