Captivating little story. Thank you for sharing

Love the first sing in chapter 2 and am hoping to her my friend to come up with some chords and play it how I imagined it in my head

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I like how instead of direct confrontation, you made Snape only hear and glimpse Harry. Because I know that many people can act different when they know that they're being watched. And another thing I like here is that Snape is, in a way, realizing that Harry is not James. That he's hating an illusion instead of the actual person.

The ending was perfect. The fact that it resonated with Snape, shows that he now probably has some understanding of Harry.

YAY! I like the lyrics!

thats very sad.. did you write the lyrics by yourself ? if it's a song, can u tell me the title and the singer ?

dost mine ears deceive me? this sounds like a suicide, my dear author/authoress...

clarification? pwetty pwease? *big puppy eyes*

good fic. i like the songs you worked into it. great job!

i would've too. i would've done just that!

I love it. It was so sad, so real.

really Powerful... That was great! I know this'll sound weird but could you make a sequel on one hand i want you to make a sequel on the other i don't but i think that was a really awesome story really powerful! great job!

-sniffles and claps wildly- Beautifully, beautifully, done.

Amazing story

omg i luv this its so well final if u know what i mean. I don't think u should hav a seqeul to it (unless u already do) maybe u should do like a seperate story that could be a few years later? if u do could u let me know id luv to read it :D

Amazing...

Like this one. and your version of Hary.

this is a really good story!