Reviews for Tatooine
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15
You killed Luke!
Apart from that it was very good.
myfirsymask chapter 1 . 4/4
I love this fanfic! so DARK!
I was wondering if this a one-shot or not? because if it's not a one-shot please continue soon. I'm dying for a Anakin/Vader pov and reaction to all of this.
Maryna chapter 1 . 12/13/2017
Just. Amazing. I am not sure you even visit , but I would still like to ask for your permission to translate this fic into Russian.
Gigira chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
(Got an account but forgot to log in before typing this review)
Laryn is a hell of a bastard and I hope Vader - uh, or Anakin I suppose, given that he uses his real name - strangles him slowly and painfully. Well, no, that really isn't fair, is it? I mean, Stryden is so frustrated with his station that he takes it out (I assume incessantly) on poor Laryn, who in turn, doubtlessly as disillusioned as his superior, takes a petty revenge by shutting up when he's told to and guaranteeing that Stryden's endures Va- Anakin's wrath. The worst is that they just don't give a damn about the young local who was killed in the process, and thus an untruthful yet innocent-looking slogan for the Navy ends up claiming a child's life. Clearly the biggest tragedy here doesn't reside in Luke's death at Han's hand... Fics like this make you realise the whole wrongness of the Empire. Loved the cynicism and the irony, though - everything makes sense, it feels so implacable. Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2015
Wow. Brrrrrrrr. That was chilling. Poor Luke... Now all I can think of is Vader's reaction when getting on Tatooine... Good job. I'm shaken.
maniacreader chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Damn awesome!
T. Alana M chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
Oh my God they killed Luke! :(
Xaojaura chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
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That's taking it to far... Never kill Luke...

...

"Jedi Sentinel Cratu?"

"Yes Master?"

"Take them to court and find the proof we need... We won't stand for Jedi abuse..."

...

Good story... other than you killing Luke...
Hoplite39 chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
A very chilling AU story (in a positive sense) where everyone loses.I like how Stryden's views on his career change throughout te story. And the ending was a nice touch.
Ravnur chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Oh man, I expected a rescue or something in the last moment... So they know Darth Vader is Anakin Skywalker in this AU? Hmm... Interesting.
FallenMoose chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
I feel extremely sorry for Stryden. Run, mate. RUN.
Vader will NOT be happy.
At least we still have Leia (or do we?).
shieldmaiden19 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Well-written, believable oneshot AUs are incredibly rare, and I had almost given up hope of finding another until I read this. It. Was. Great. :D
urcool91 chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
One of the most shocking fics I have ever read.
Darth Vadie chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Well, this is one of my favorite fics EVER! I wish I had an account to show it to the galaxy.
Vandenberg chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Great job in writing this up. ;D

-Sked-San-san
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