hey i was wondering when you were going to update again? i mean it has been a while right? well anyways just wondering. please do soon. bye:D

hey nice story and keep writting thanks and bye:D

I like it, I hope Ryou can make Seto happy again... Update QUICKLY please...? *puppy-dog-eyes*

I'm so glad you updated. This chapter was so sad. Seto was all like "your scaring me!" that was sad. i felt like crying cause i could imagine him saying that. please do more chapters. this chapter isn't meses up at all. i can't wait for future chapters!

Don't change this. This was a good update. It's helpful to know how Mokuba died and how Seto is dealing with it. It gives us more insight into Seto's character.

This was sad. Mokuba being killed when he was on a date...

If you do want to change something, you might want to add what it was that killed Mokuba. Because now we don't know wether he's been hit by a car or stabbed or shot or beaten...

My suggestion is changing this:

Seto once again brought up a conversation with Ryou before two loud screams pierced the air, followed by the sound of screeching tires.

But like I said, other than that, don't change this.

Yay! You updated finally! I thought you died or somethihg and this would never ever update again. ...I was seriously almost in tears when I read this, it was so sad. And poor Seto was in denial...he needs a hug. Although I think his reaction was a very Seto thing to do. Sorry this review is so short, I've only got a few minutes before the bus comes, and I don't wanna be late for school ;. Try to update soon and good luck!

StOP WITH THE TEASER CHAPTERS ALREADY!

pwease?

*snif* I feel sad for Seto and for Ryou.

Angstwise, you're doing just fine. So you don't have to worry about that too much. I would really love to see this being continued/started. _

Oh, My God!

Mokuba's gone? He died? How could this happen? :(

This is amazing. Please make more chapters! I love how this story is and i love seto/bakura. Will we find out how Mokuba died? Please, please, please, please, PLEASE make more chapters!

really good so far. hope you do continue.

I really hater teaser chappies... SO REVIEW!

*gasp* A SetoRyou! I love this coupling so much, you have no idea how happy seeing this made me! Please continue this, please? I think it's a great idea, and Seto and Ryou were very in character with their reactions. Are we going to find out how Mokuba died? Please, please, please, please, please, please, update soon! *adds story to favorites*

huh...well it was ok. work better on following ones and its be worth something.

Aw! dude if you dont continue this story i will murder all of your friends and family! Aww! Y does seto have to cry? Dammit the story line is too good! i keep on re reading it but it still makes me want to read it again and again and again... damn u!

THUMBS UP!