Hello. Please keep working on this! The cutest and the most ingenious yet. I like every chapter by far, but this is the most hillarious and well, of course, sweet. (Cure a cold with a gunblade!)

Looking forward to more, please.

BTW.I really like it that you remain so true to the character with all this humor. It is really difficult to mix these two things together...romance and humor and dialoges that are true to the character. Squll does not turn mush, and Rinoa does not sound silly. Again, love these pieces so much. Nothing I dislike yet. Keep working!

Have I ever said how much I love your writing? Because I do.

Haha that was hilarious! Rinoa's so sneaky :P I like how they talked more in this chappie - even if Squall was being unbelievably stubborn. "The white blood cells will take care of it, Rinoa.” LMAO. So glad I decided to read all of these. If you decide to do another one, I will definitely be looking forward to it _

'Rinoa giving birth made being a SeeD look easy' That made me laugh as soon as I first read it. Faith is one of my favourite girls names too ] Squall's last line was too cute. Excellent jo _

It's hard to imagine Rinoa pregnant because she's so small :P It's nice to see Zell and Squall interacting as friends. You don't see alot of that in fics. Very sweet at the end; nice to Squall having a completely defenseless moment. Fabulous _

God that was beautiful. Again, I have to commend you on your writing style. Exactly the right mix of emotion and detail. How sweet - they both wished for the same thing XD They both got it too. Very impressive _

That was unique. His eyes are the perfect shade of blue ] Your use of adjectives especially stood out in this chapter. Well placed and you used the perfect words too. Beautifully expressed. Great job _

Short but very sweet. Wonderfully writen too. The way you write about emotions is very convincing. It drew me in ] Awesome job _

Hehe he that was really good I hope you continue!

So cute! I love these so much! Sneaky of Rinoa, giving him cough syrup like that, lol.

I love this. I think you wrote a very convincing analysis of Squall's perosonality. I also liked how you broke up the fic into sections with the line of three words and had the words set the mood for what followed.

Nicely done!

I like the use of the adjectives every couple paragraphs. and of course the end of the chapter again, as always. Damn, I wish my husband had eyes like that, I stare at them forever...

ohhehe, "tell you white blood cells" (salute) "mission accomplished." Great! I love the endings to these chapters! My husband tried doing something like that to me (not with cough syrup) but it got messy and dribbled down our mouths...it was gross.

aAww, I love the ending to this chapter!

cute cute cute.. i really find this chapter cute!Ü hehe... i really liked the white blood cells thingy. Ü

very nice. i love the interaction going between Squall and Rinoa..

nicely done.

keep it up!Ü