This was a highly entertaining story, as was the one it's a sequel to. Thanks.

Loving the story, but I have to point out - the Marine Corps doesn't do the "only officers are called sir" thing. Any higher ranking member of the Corps is sir - from a PFC on up to a full General.

SSGT Team503, USMC, RET

Awesome story!

great fic :D

great story!

Interesting.

I liked the way you handled Dawn in this fic.

Too bad there was no romance, I just love romance.

I'm just curious as to how much the "accepted" view of the universe you subscribe to, and that is only after the first chapter! if the phrase, "absence of evidence is not evidence of absence" means anything to you, or if it arouses you curiosity, please feel free to contact me if you know what I'm blathering about, and have stopped laughing at me ;-), when/if you send an e-mail please use the subject line "starship imagination," as i have automatic junking and periodically check for interesting mail.

p.s. i understand if you delete this and pretend as if i wasn't even here ( i know i sound weird but the reality is so much worse! :-)

I wish there was more stories from this storyverse

Excellent story. I loved the plot and the way you wrote the characters. Again, as in the previous story, the plot is well contructed and the situations belivable within their various universes. Thus far this is the single best SG-1/Buffy crossover I've ever read.

good story. Too bad there isn't a sequel :p

i enjoyed all of your stories so far, so it's a good sign.

hope you continue to writte.

Nice to find a good story about Dawn's origins that's actually complete. The only other good one I've found so far is still just beginning. (I believe it was by imjustaguy, but I could be wrong)

Great work. You have done a good job with the crossover. I hope for a sequal.

It was pretty good I liked it it was unique. I still prefer Buffy to Dawn but Dawn always got on my nerves in the series. (whiny crybaby) Of course Buffy sometimes did too. Oh no was that Herrisy? (I was referring to her speaches about the horrible evil that was comming in season 7) Oh well I did indead enjoy your story. I could almost see Willow and Buffy coming to join Stargate command too in a sequil to help avert a major prob with the wraith or the Gould. or something.

oh this was great! ! ! I loved it!

coolest 'Key' centric story ever