Amazing!~~~~~

all I know to say about this: I loved it!

Oh wow, that was hilarious! I liked it a lot!

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Oh this is priceless. Great work.

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I LOVE how you write! It's very easy to read and very funny as well. And seriously, your awesome summary definitely didn't disappoint.

I don't even know where to start in this review, but your sense of wit and humour killed me. There were so many great moments and lines I can't even keep track of them all. I especially loved how you decided to throw out Joey's stereotypical "I'm gonna kill Kaiba" reaction to Serenity's relationship with him. Exploitation of Kaiba's riches is surprisingly SO much more fun to read. I never even thought about it, but it makes so much sense! Also, the whole premise behind this story is fantastic. I can totally see Joey wanting to steal Kaiba's chocolate (heck, I'D wanna steal his chocolates! Whatta waste!).

I also love the way you characterized everyone in the story. Joey was spot on, and I love your take on Serenity (she was way too much fun to read) and Kaiba was great as well. Yes, he would be so unromantic and it's great! Also, the way you set everything up in the story (with the ending being at the beginning and the random cuts from present to past) was fantastic and made the read so much better and unpredictable.

Only thing I have in regards to criticism is that there's a couple of spelling mistakes and the fact that you're inconsistent with the use of the Japanese and English names of the characters. It's nothing big, but it doesn't make a lot of sense to only use Joey and Serenity's English names while using everyone else's Japanese ones.

But other than that, this has got to be one of my favourite SerenityXSeto stories ever. I can definitely see the inspiration from PinkStarz (though it's been a while since I've read her WtFMiKR). All in all, thanks for an awesome read!

Hey awesomeness story it was amazin

This is hilarious! Bravado.

Yet another hit in my books! Tasteful comedic timing, and I honestly didn't think it was LITERALLY a dumpster she was stuck in. You brought that to light in a very timely fashion, and I can't help but adore her monologuing and brotherly love. Very interesting story, never fails to make me smile and laugh, had loads of fun hearing Joey fuss about getting chocolate, and the "WHY DON'T YOU LOVE ME ANYMORE"...ROTFLMAO! Best line YET!

Keep up the excellent work, expect more long tedious excitable reviews from me (sry i can't help myself sometimes, it's just too good) XD

Sincerely,

P.O.J.A _

wow that was rally good i hope yoou will write more stories XD

LOL Usually I don't like fics where Serenity's OOC but this one cracked me up so much it made up for everything. Much love and props. :D

Heh... I like your weiting style. Good job with the story!

So CUTE!

Totally sweet and more than a little hilarious! The lenghs Serenity must go to, to please both her over-protective brother and her heartless, or so it seems, boyfried. Though Joey's reaction to his sister going out with his arch nemesis, was a bit..lets say mellow? I mean, I would have thought that Joey would be more...violent. Anyways, the way Serenity narrated the story, I thought that was very, very good. Her depiction may have been a bit out of character, but it wasn't so much that she seemed like another person. On the whole, I think a very well job done!

That was amazing.