Please finish!

You arescape the worst for saying kikyo is better than kagome.
Kikyo is a bit cheaper and doesn't deserve her second life she is also a traitor I mean in one movie she just handed a sacred and powerful object to naraku if that does not prove I don't know what does

in regard to your comment to dream beamz comment... you forgot she is evil to kagome some times too, particularly in the beginning.

why is his lung still not healed? and what is the real reason he wasnt trained to fight more as a kid? makes no sense- as the prince he should have been learning MORE then the others, not learning women's chores (as that is what they were in those times)...

ummmm whyd they knock him out if he was cooperating?

good start for the story line but you have to really pay attention to the punctuation during the dialog or its easy to loose track of who is talking. It would make it much easier if you separated the dialog by person in separate paragraph ie:

-how you have it now (an excerpt from your story)
He turned in the direction where the scent was the strongest. Not long after, Kouga appeared before him. "What the hell do you want, asshole?" he asked, ever graceful. "I want to see Kagome, where is she? I have the right to know where my woman lives, dog turd!" Kouga wasn't the one to be polite either.

-it hard to tell that its two different people talking, so this is how i find it easier to read.

He turned in the direction where the scent was the strongest. Not long after, Kouga appeared before him. "What the hell do you want, asshole?" he asked, ever graceful.

"I want to see Kagome, where is she? I have the right to know where my woman lives, dog turd!" Kouga wasn't the one to be polite either.

OMG this is amazing! Please continue writing and I look forward to anymore K/K storylines you've got!

please update when u get a chance

Can someone please continue this fanfic?

HOW DARE U DISRESPECT OUR QUEEN (SPITS ON HIM OR HER) YOU SAY THE DEAD CLAY BITCH IS DA WAE. KAGOME IS THA WAE YOU DO NOT KNO DA WAE AND I WILL NUT SHO U (SPITS ON INUYASHA)
Inuyasha : HEY
(SPITS ON HIM AGAIN)
INUYASHA : IM GONNNA KILL YOU
(CLUCKING)
COME MY BRUDDAHS (ME AND BRUDDAHS SPIT ON HIM
INUYASHA : all around me are familiar faces TT
(ME AND BRUDDAHS KEEP SPITTING ON HIM)
INUYASHA : how could this happen to meee i made my mistaake got no where to ruuun TT

I love this story. Please please finish the story. I am excited to read what happens next!

WHAT THE FUCK!

You should have kagome bring kouga back to life on the next chapter.

kouga could have taken her with him and he could have still be alive if he had any sense at all! BAKA If you don't know what it means than idiot,moron,stupid, etcetera!

I love this one it is awesome