You do a really good job showing Naraku/Onigumo's psyche in this chapter.

This chapter is always the one where I have the most trouble following the events.

Kurama and Kagura are walking and talking, then Kurama and Jinenji. Did Kurama and Jinenji just happen upon the results of the desecration of his parents? Or did Jinenji somehow know about it and they somehow went there? Or did they actually go there or where they just "there" spiritually?

Since I get the impression that they are in Jinenji's castle, did someone actually manage to infiltrate to make the attack? Or is the memorial in Ningenkai?

If you're still around to get this review, I'd love some clarification on thid chapter.

Kuranama jumping up and running is hilarious, just makes me think of a "Oh sh!t" moment, like someones gonna die. I'm worried about the fox's noesyness, curiosity is a good thing, but too much curiosity leads to trouble, ahhhh

I really love how well involved this fic is, but I'l be honest, the mystery is giving me anxiety lol, like I keep clicking next chapter, but also scared about what's going to happen. And just asdfghplhlfn, just a good author to bring out these feelings, even if not all so pleasant haha

I have really enjoyed this and I only wish it wasn't over yet. Thank you for a great story.

I Loved this so much! Wonderful story. I am going to have to check out the rest of your stuff now.

I have got to say that this has been one of the most intriguing story that I've come across. It's a very different take on how things came to be for those involved with the Shikon no Tama. I've never come across a plot that involved a sightless Kagome who wasn't truly blind... who was timeless... who was responsible for creating the three realms.

This has got to be one of my all time fave cross overs where the journey of the characters was much more enthralling than actually reaching their desired goals. I was also touched by everyone's unwavering loyalty to Kagome, who is greatly loved, cherished and protected like no other.

Keep up the amazing work and I look forward to reading your other works. :P

I love inu!

I need to know more about Onigumo!

Hahahahah!
I love Sesshomaru!

Awesome!

I absolutely love this!

Just found this, possibly again because some of it seems familiar, a few days ago & took a few days to read it. Has some problems, may have degraded from site maintenance & such. I liked it although it's rather confusing & you have a lot of unanswered questions at the end.

really great story

hope you write many more like this :)

Wow, i must say i really love this story.