This is great! Not going to lie though...I hate the very idea of Hiei being with someone as annoying as Pan (even though I really like Pan). I just can't with their "scenes" I can't. I love this please continue, very addictive!

Holy shit balls.

This took an unexpected turn! Wasn't expecting that! 0.0

Well, I for one, am excited to read the rest of this story! I've been here since the beginning, and hell, I plan on finishing this with you. haha! I didn't realize you had updated! I would have read this sooner! but either way, I'm glad I decided to check in! And you're so right about the old part! Man! I am old too!

Well, hopefully things get a bit easier regardless of what you're going through. I too just had a baby this year, and sadly I've been through literal hell as she ended up passing away. No one should ever have to bury their child. Never.

BUT I am curious as to how I still play a part in this! haha! Well now, I'll just have to be patient and enjoy the ride, right? XD

You're awesome! Hope to see more soon!

~Sachiya

NOOOOOOOO! That was MY kiss! Damn her!

*Pulls out list of 100 plots I made to kill her**Starts humming evilly* Let's see what I'm in the mood for tonight...

Awesome chapter! And still faithfully going to see this to the end! Glad to see you're still alive though! ha! Hope things start to go smoother for you in life! (it sounds crazy right now. Much like my own. I feel ya.) Can't wait to see what happens next!

Hiei's ONLY onna!
Sachiya

Oh wow! My Fire Demon did so well! *Fangirl scream* I can't believe it! My man can DANCE!

On another note...

Pan. Is. Going. To. Die.

Yes, that's right! Why is she pestering my man so much!? WHY IS HE LETTING HER GET CLOSE!? There is something wrong here... very wrong.

Pan better watch her back. *Evilly smirks*

And it's alright! Just glad you're back! Can't wait until next time!

Hiei's Only Onna!

Sachiya! 3

Wonderful chapter and challenge! Thank you for not giving up on the story. :D

This is crazy funny and so full of suspense and drama! Seriously I've never read something that made you laugh so hard. please update soon. I really want to know who'll win this battle of the sexes. I'm so glad that Yusuke and Keiko have resolved their issues because they are my favorite characters. I was up two days reading this story and I must say bravo. How you're able to write this story is impressive and pretty addicting to read so don't leave me hanging!

"Silence! I'll kill you!" HAHA! I love how you threw that in! :D Hiei's voice for that moment transformed into Achmed's voice. haha.

*Glares at Pan* I have to keep my eyes on that one.

I love how Keiko and Yusuke are back! haha. They are too cute to be apart. :) But DANG Keiko really went to town on getting revenge!

WHO"S THE RETURNING GIRL!? Oh man! I want to know! I can't wait to find out!

Sachiya: Hiei's onna! 3

Eeeee! I can't wait now! You've peaked my interest!

And here I was, having an early Christmas because of the YusKei moments early in this chapter. And then I had to reach the ending. Ugh. This has got to be for the competition. Yusuke's not the type to cheat on Keiko. But then, who am I kidding? This is a fanfiction!

Wonderful, wonderful chapter. Thank you.

Holy SH-BLEEP! 0.0'

: Damn, that's very depressing news.
2. It's cute how Yusuke was so worried about Keiko.
3. Kurama just opened the gates of Hell, and I for one, will be not around when sh-bleep hits the fan. WHY Yukina?! WHY Kurama!?
4. I didn't see any of this coming.
5. Pan better watch her back. *Glares*

This was awesome! LOTS to take in! (And I wasn't referencing the length of this chapter either. haha.) CAN"T wait till the next one! :D

Sachiya: Hiei's Snuggle Bunny onna! 3

Oh Master! Anything for you! I would so appreciate a bigger cage! *Gets supper excited* My leg tends to cramp up and... N-Not that I'm complaining or anything! *sweatdrop*

0.o Who the heck has Kurama been with? And... what the!? I'm a bit scared of what's going to be happening next! Eeep! *Curls up under a blanket* This is taking a turn I didn't see...

Hiei! I need to cuddle with Hiei! *goes to search for him for comfort*

Looking forward to the next one! :D

Sachiya: Hiei's Onna

Hiei always has his bases covered.

Ohh... Bases and covered are bringing up naughty thoughts. *Blushes*

;)

Faithfully forever,
Sachiya: Hiei's only Onna

Wow. Yukina freaking ROCKS!

Well, that's what you get for being the most Bad Ass Fire Demon's sis.

Gotta love my future sis in law! :D haha.

Sachiya: Hiei's onna!

Saw that one coming. haha.

Sigh. Hiei is just so... Macho. No matter what he does. Ahhh. *SWOONS*

Sachiya: Hiei's onna.

HAHAHAHA, I forgot how funny this chapter was! :D

Except the part where Pan is trying to get it on with my sexy toy soldier. Yeah.

BACK OFF SMALL FRY!

La-di-da! *Smiles innocently*

Sachiya: Hiei's Only Onna!