very good

wow amazing. well done :)

For some reason having Quentin Travers saying

"We are so screwed" seems like the funniest

thing I've read fo awhile.

Oh, poor Rupert. Buffy and Xander sitting in a tree. F-U-C-K-I-N-G.:D

Man, those Watchers...just when you think they've scraped the bottom of the barrel, they tunnel through to the ground under it.:(

So Dawn can't speak, huh? What a shame. In spite of the horrific ending of this chapter, I appreciated the short part that let us have some insight into Travers' mental processes. Most stories just portray him as a bastard and leave it at that.

Boy, this bond you have between your characters is strange but great. I wonder who'll leave first-Anya or Tara?

You know, pouty, whiny Anya is just as annoying as pouty, whiny Dawn. Thank goodness you've kept Dawn the wannabe-Slayer out of this for the time being.

It's going to take me awhile to get through all your stories but this is shaping up to be a good one. But...Oprah Winfrey?

You, without doubt, have one of the most wicked, lively and vivid imaginations I have yet encountered in an author in the FanFiction universe. Superb story. Any chance for a sequal? I'd love to know if so. Keep up the wonderful work.

Woah. That was great. Your explanation of Glory's and Ben's relationship made sense. I like the whole Unity thing, although it was hard to picture Giles being thirty and the others being twent-five.

I loved this story. Great work...

Great ending to a great series! I hope you keep on writing.

Yay, I like the ending, and there must be a sequel!

you are going to add another part to this arnt you. because if you ask me this story can't just end like this. it just can't. i love what you have done with the storry line and hope to see another chapter to the series. ecilent storry line.