awww cute

Cute story thanks for writing it.

Love it

I like how the whole story of these two was interspersed with the main event, it tied everything together quite nicely.

It is up to my standards and I give you flames of fortune. Or at least I would if they existed. But they don't so I can't.

I love it !

I LOVE IT!OTP!

Thank you.

I DO NOT like weird fics like these. I only looked at it because a person read it on youtube. You need to take a writing class or something because your tense changes pisses me off. And it COMPLETELY defys nature. You should really get a beta reader. Or two. Or maybe even three. Sorry, but this whole story is DISGUSTING and freaky. I'm sure you could write something much better than this. But keep writing, I'm sure it'll get better.

This is sad, sweet, and very unique. I really like it. Great job. :)

I heard about this story on Youtube, and so I felt like I had to read it.

This is absolutely horrible! You keep changing from past to present tense, miss what seems like thousands of commas, and it's Mpreg.

Mpreg is stupid. It's not physically possible, number one. Number two, Harry having sex with Snape when he's in his sixth year is illegal. There's more, but I won't go into.

This is pure awfulness. It almost puts My Immortal to shame.

I've read this story so many times on AFF; I'm so happy to find it here on this website. I love it so much! Have you ever thought of writing another Mpreg!Severus. I see that you finished a quite lengthy Mpreg!Harry; not really a fave of mine, I just skimmed the story, it's still good from what I grasped. I love sub!Sev, there just isn't enough around; and the way to wrote this one always makes me happy when I read it; great read. Sequel, perhaps? Another story? Something! More Mpreg!Snape!

Funny, well something different keeps up the joy... Magic

Absolutely loved, you never fail to surprise me...

Oh and I love the complications and the whole Sev as a hermaphrodite part, quite original if I may say so myself.

I love the idea, great story.