Learn to spell, or get a beta reader. Holy shit.

MarsAlis are my favorite pairing and.I love that you and I share the same interests

Leave sakura out this story is so good without herding ruin it

Type your review useless plot start

Shouldn’t Minato or Kushina have helped Naruto, Minato to reseal Kyuubi and Kushina to hold him down?

that pirate of yours isn't likable in the slightest... he makes me think of what would happen if Blackbeard (from one-piece), Dolores Umbridge (Harry Potter), and Gilderoy Lockhart (also from Harry Potter) were fused into a single person...

That Venture bastard is basically Gato... may he be torn limb-from-limb as painfully as possible until death.

wtf fuck you and this story wat bull shit is this story how the fuck can they have fucking charka it's belongs to the juubi and they need to be born with it u fucking cunt I hope u fucking kill urself u sorry excuse of a bitch

Terko reminds me a LOT of Bellatrix Lestrange...

This whole chapter I couldn't help but read Captain Blood with Captain Barbossas voice from pirates of the caribbean, the whole scene just reminded me of it too much. His character is also very similar I think, and I can't help but infer that you intended it to be similar... hmm...

CH 33

For torture ideas I prefer small lots cuts ,whipping especially with spike extensions on the whip especially heated to white hot ,
Toxins and acids.
Shadow form elemental imitation or just use the shadow like Gaara's sand .
,bombarding with meteors comets ,moon chunks ,moon, and Mars .
But I didn't feel to want those on anyone in the moment and you are good Author .

Ch 25 I think it is Kuubi . In some stories , They went to agreement and even simmiliality beside being Eons old Being . I think it is that. And that Fox Grin is Fox . Kitsune .Who knows. Maybe.

"A reward? He'd never gotten a reward before!"
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...I call bullshit.

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Reminds me of indra and ashura when ashura got the clan head title and Indra didn't then Indra didn't betrayed ashura