Reviews for Took Long Enough |
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RedWingedAngel002 chapter 1 . 10/28/2009 Lols. A bit fast there at the end.. but very cute none the less! Ari chan |
QuickStar chapter 1 . 5/4/2008 you should use the other part of the song not the "why do you cry" the one "why do you smile" |
Basslover93 chapter 1 . 7/16/2007 ...perfect... |
Drifting One chapter 1 . 1/30/2007 I love this. I absolutely love it. *sigh* Best lemon, though not very explicit, I've read in a while. *adds story to faves* |
MuppyPuppy chapter 1 . 9/27/2006 i loved it... |
Gothcat chapter 1 . 2/7/2006 I love it, Your story is really awsome and now I have to go to school so bye bye. |
weirdo chapter 1 . 9/10/2005 weird |
kaitou angel chapter 1 . 9/4/2005 wow! i so loved it! loved it loved it loved it! u must make more! make more stories like this! you're so cool! sincerely, kaitou angel* |
F.M. Wrights chapter 1 . 7/8/2005 Wai this was one of the best stoeries I've ever read about the two of them. Perhaps you should consider to make a continuing story Anyway, keep up the good work! |
Kagasha chapter 1 . 7/5/2005 omg. i luved it. how it began and how it ended. its was so cute. i couldnt ever write anything like this. Mahiru/Mitsuru fanfics are my fav. and this is my number 1! write more like these. ~kagasha |
piper mcllelan chapter 1 . 6/26/2005 that was sweet, i really thought it was good. |
Adriana chapter 1 . 6/26/2005 i loved it! it was so sweet! kepp up the good work! . |
cookoopuff911 chapter 1 . 6/26/2005 it was awesome!the love making action was great but it could have gotten more detailing things while they were making was kool! |
atamagaokashii Ookami chapter 1 . 6/18/2005 OMFG! That was so kawaii *tear and smile* :D What a great 1-shot!Right now I'm working on my own Crescent Moon story rated T for teen though lol. Go Mahiru! Go Mitsuru! They're so kawaii together don't u agree? Well I'll be looking for ur other story later *waves* |