Reviews for Took Long Enough
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
Lols. A bit fast there at the end.. but very cute none the less!

Ari chan
QuickStar chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
you should use the other part of the song

not the "why do you cry"

the one "why do you smile"
Basslover93 chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
...perfect...
Drifting One chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
I love this. I absolutely love it.

*sigh*

Best lemon, though not very explicit, I've read in a while.

*adds story to faves*
MuppyPuppy chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
i loved it...
Gothcat chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
I love it, Your story is really awsome and now I have to go to school so bye bye.
weirdo chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
weird
kaitou angel chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
wow! i so loved it! loved it loved it loved it! u must make more! make more stories like this! you're so cool!

sincerely, kaitou angel*
F.M. Wrights chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
Wai this was one of the best stoeries I've ever read about the two of them. Perhaps you should consider to make a continuing story

Anyway, keep up the good work!
Kagasha chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
omg. i luved it. how it began and how it ended. its was so cute. i couldnt ever write anything like this. Mahiru/Mitsuru fanfics are my fav. and this is my number 1! write more like these.

~kagasha
piper mcllelan chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
that was sweet, i really thought it was good.
Adriana chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
i loved it! it was so sweet! kepp up the good work! .
cookoopuff911 chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
it was awesome!the love making action was great but it could have gotten more detailing things while they were making was kool!
atamagaokashii Ookami chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
OMFG! That was so kawaii *tear and smile* :D What a great 1-shot!Right now I'm working on my own Crescent Moon story rated T for teen though lol. Go Mahiru! Go Mitsuru! They're so kawaii together don't u agree? Well I'll be looking for ur other story later *waves*
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