i nearly cryed when i watch this episode

wow. this is really cool. I liked how you explored Leo's thoughts on this matter and really got into his head. great job.

i haven't seen 'return to the underground', but i'd like too, since i recently watched 'notes from the underground'. donnie's my favourite, and, how strange it may sound, i like it when he's hurt and/or when the others worry about him. good story, and i'm sure i'll appreciate it even more when i've watched 'return'!

I think this is an excellent start! I liked the memories Leo has of Don, its a good orientation. Its a little short, but then it was just over a few seconds.

I liked it. It was short but good none the less. Do you plan on writing anything else? I loved how you wrote a story based off of the new show! I thought I was the only one writing based off of the new show. At any rate, good job so kudos and update soon!

You don't even have to say please! I liked it - it showcased your talent well even though it was short...you have my attention, and I'd love to see something longer. So now I guess it's my turn to say please?

*Standing and clapping* Everyone welcome Stocktonwood! Have a seat, stay a while, enjoy some hot chocolate and bask in the company of fellow TMNT fanatics!

~All the love, SASSY

Short but sweet, and nicely written to boot. This is a good attempt at a first fic; all the brothers are in character, with their reactions to Donny not surfacing. I'll be looking out for more from you soon.

Heya!

Short and sweet, and you NAILED them! Definitely C2 worthy! I'll be adding it as soon as I am done here.

I love the little memories you had flashing through Leo's mind. That listening paid off, this was a wonderful little story!

Cheers,

~pacphys~

Short, sweet and absolutely delightful. Nicely done, Stocktonwood, and I look forward reading more great fics from you!

Short, but well-detailed. Could I have done better? I think not. Great job...oh your first fic too? Congratulations, and welcome to the crazy world of fanfiction. Enjoy the ride.