| Reviews for Not Goodbye |
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   Twilightrocks27 chapter 1 . 10/14/2007 This was so good! i'm going to read forbiden now but wow! that was awsome! |
| LyricalAnatomy chapter 1 . 4/5/2006 That was so beautiful! I almost cried! I'm being serious about this. I can't wait to start reading your sequal! |
| Something-French-Sounding chapter 1 . 4/4/2006 Uh... I can't read this. No way in hell that'd happen. Sorry. |
| Dannie Tomlinson chapter 1 . 3/4/2006 Wow..Amazing fic! Loved it! |
| cassie89 chapter 1 . 7/26/2005 ow...that's soo sweet:-) congratulations |
| Chelsea chapter 1 . 7/21/2005 Oh my god, that was so good. I loved it! It was heartbreak and fluff all in a one-shot. Bravo! You must write more. |
| Certifiably Insane chapter 1 . 7/13/2005 Hey! Great story! I cant wait to read the update! Go u! xx Kat |
| IberianLynx chapter 1 . 6/10/2005 You better write more I had tears in my eyes when I finished this. WRITE MORE! Merci Beaucoup DTF |
| deathofreek chapter 1 . 5/28/2005 T,T T_T T.T that's my review. |
| Starburst427 chapter 1 . 4/20/2005 wow, that was a really nice fic. it tottally should be a real fic, not a one-shot! pliiz continue and update! it's way too good to be a one-shot! u've seriouisly got to continue! Much love! Jasmine P |
| starry chapter 1 . 4/17/2005 omigosh... that was so beautiful.. i mean it! I was a little reluctant at first because it was supposed to be sad, but then i'm so glad that i did. ) Lub, Starry |
| LolliliciousLolly chapter 1 . 4/17/2005 Aww, darn... That was a) random, b) a/u and c) ...a beautiful piece of fiction... Aww, Aina, that was so bittersweet. Seriously, can you imagine what bittersweet would taste like? Like...something sugary and citrus-y. Something that would make your tongue cringe and want more at the same time. Something that makes you heart ache and then laugh from the deadly pain you feel. This was bittersweet, all right. Firstly, please kindly turn away so you have to not witness the brutal murder of Mr and Mrs de Silva, for being such assholes. God. "Blah, you're not good enough for our son. He has standards. In this family, we have traditions. Drag, and self-urine drinking. You obviously cannot do those things. Therefore you're not good enough for us. So kiss you own ass, Miss Simon." God, what a STUPID thing to say! "Susannah, please do not take this the wrong way." Is there any OTHER way to take "we have higher expectations for our little Jesse-poo." I mean, come on. It's like saying, "No offense, but you're butt-ugly." If you don't want to OFFEND someone, you keep your mouth shut. I always cringe when a sentence starts with "no offence but..." I mean, you know you're going to end up kind of upset. I love the style that you wrote it in. You know, that fractured kind of way. How you missed out some of the "I"s at the starts of sentence. It made it sound pained and scared. Like, she was barely able to talk as she was recounting this story, and the fewer the words she said in a sentence, the less pain it would cause her. If that makes sense. Which it probably doesn't. It's times like this that I remember, Oh yeah, Jesse exists too. Paul isn't everything. But he's sure a hell of a lot of everything. Like...59% of my everythingness. Suze is 38% and Jesse is the rest. Muahaha. Nah. I lurve Suzie, and I lurve Paul and on the occasion that you write something as with such sweet citrus content as this, I lurve Jesse to high heaven. *sigh* Write more or Malaysia GETS IT. Love Lolly. :D |
| JESSiE chapter 1 . 4/16/2005 Cute. I like it. It's sexy. |
| Strawberry-Shortcake01 chapter 1 . 4/15/2005 *makes sound of a wounded animal* This is just what I needed after googling that damn Tuck everlasting! lol Its good! But sad! But good! Shutting up. Linds. |
| AngrySmiles chapter 1 . 4/15/2005 continue continue continue -AS |
