Awesome story I hope you continue writing it soon

Dear Gryfinrose

I have read your story and I think it's great. You did a good job on the personalities of the characters.

You did a good job on the style; I felt like I was watching a Kim Possible episode.

You did a great job on the quality too!

And the basic story is good. The way Drakken and Shego express their love for each-other was very touching and romantic. The sequence where Kim and Ron are at school and are invited to Drakken and Shego's wedding was amusing. The wedding was very profound and humorous (And I am glad that Drakken and Shego gave-up evil because I think love and evil don't mix) The final sequence where Shego is holding her twin son and daughter in her arms, and her husband Drakken/Drew, Kim her family, and ron are prestent was very profound!

The wholesome stands are very high.

The language is clean.

Though I didn't like what Drakken and Shego did before their wedding; I am glad that there was on sexuality or any other vile content!

I hope this review has a good influence on you.

Sincerely

Data Seeker

THIS IS GOING TO GIVE ME NIGHTMARES FOR A WEEK! DONT GET ME WRONG ABOUT WHAT I SAID ABOUT THE NIGHTMARES I DID ENJOY YOUR STORY ITS JUST THE HOLE DRAKEN AND SHEGO THING ITS JUST SOMTHING THAT MAKES ME GO BUA... (LOL) :)

AAW! Bummer! This was getting so good. An update would have been great. How you put in the interaction between the different characters is awesome especially at the end with Monkey Fist still being pursued by DNAmy. Very well done!

A happy ending to so the drama. Love D&S. Good work!

Good job! Well written! Didn't like the fact that they had, ya know, BEFORE they got married, but it's you're story. The part w/ DNAmy and Monkey Fist at the ending was funny! Anyways, keep up the good work!

Hehehe, "Sugar booger", hehehe! DNAmy and Monkey Fist. I liked this story. Very cute. Thanks for updating. Keep writing and keep smiling : ).

Tootles,

Widow Shark

I liked this. Haha! Kim's gonna marry Ron! Anyway, the story was great.

put in another chapter!

O-O ::blinks:: wow...Interesting! Love the couple! ::Sques, and runs off::

oh i so love this one it's so going into my fav's.

don't worry about it. now you have to describe the wedding, or i will send my Shego clone out to get you (yes, i have a Shego clone, but don't tell her that, i wanna keep this one this time... Drakken may not have succeed in keeping a clone, but i'm going to...)

Hehe, this was great. It was very well written too; it shows you take a lot of pride in your work. I love the song "Over It" and I thought it fit perfectly. I only wish I could see Kim and Ron's reactions. Maybe if you had the time you could write a part two or something. Keep up the good work and keep smiling : ).

Tootles,

Widow Shark

PS: You've been added to my faves lists : ).